1. I very like it （Fault） N,$o' \l
I like it very much. (true) 'PbA/MN
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 DK%eFCo<~
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) |%;txD
The price is right. X;>} ;LiK
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 X6 cb#s0|
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ 3<V!y&a
What's your job? （fault) P9 wDTZ
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Are you working at the moment? nQmYeM
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 ^uzVz1%mM
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4. 用英语怎么说？ 1zW6Pb
How to say? （fault) ]~ UkD*Ct
How do you say this in English? _S1uJ~j;E
Note：How to say是在中国最为泛滥成灾的中国式英语之一，这决不是地道的英语说法。同样的句子有：请问这个词如何拼写？How do you spell that please?请问这个单词怎么读？How do you pronounce this word? VNXVuM )c
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 .CpO+z
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) l/NK.Jr
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. X\RTHlw']
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. ! YHu
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6. 我没有英文名。 1 X.1t^HH:
I haven't English name. （fault) J)NpG9iN
I don't have an English name. e[!>ezaIY
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 eO G%6C%a
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. )>p6h]]a
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7. 我想我不行。 6P| n eb}
I think I can't.（fault) oFp&j@`k8j
I don't think I can. sAlgp2-
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 "Fiv
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 &0 `7_g7G
I don't dance well too. （fault) &r%3)Z8Et
I am not a very good dancer either. `_i-BdW
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 J Y16|ia
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9. 现在几点钟了？ ^ + <uHd>
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What time is it, please? (J*0/7
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 RoZV6U~
My English is poor. （fault) J M%#L *;
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. +dv@N3GV
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. {%Sw w:
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 ]"6<"1)
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 gId+hxFa:r
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. }Jfo(j
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 }JsdgO&z
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ *R d&4XG
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) ,L G&sa"
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? y"ck;OQD
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 p3' +"sFU
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12. 我没有经验。 d]]qy
I have no experience. （fault) H"l'E9k.&p
I am I don't know much about that. a{W-+t
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. kz^G.5n
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13. 我没有男朋友。 !A o?bs'
I have no boyfriend. （fault) lOui{QU
I don't have a boyfriend. yNL71 >w4
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14. 他的身体很健康。 4 KnDXQ%
His body is healthy. （fault) nabN.Ly
He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. L?fv5 S3
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 sh1()vT
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) e+[J9;g
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16. 我们下了车。 w6_}]
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We got off the car. '\Ub*m((1O
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17. 车速快了。 iJBZnU:Mp
The speed of the car is fast. O]>`B{
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ kXW x )v
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? $u :=lA:N
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） /L.a:Er$
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） F@BNSs N=
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. -)@.D>HsOt
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 & \m\QI
I feel very painful in my right hand. UL/>t}AG
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 QVpZA,
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) $gNCS:VG*
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 sAN#j
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I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) 8~i@7~
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After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. VA0 TY/{
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22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 (`xc3-,
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) qU}DOL|
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. CS/-:>s%
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 /Q!F/HY3ZS
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. PewLg<?,G4
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. IjNm/${$
24. 别理她。 [H6>] &
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) S,H{\c
Leave her alone. 3jN cL{
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 5+UiAc$
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) dY,'6 JzC
I learned a lot in university. vl<J-+|0C
26. 黄山正在读书。 7XNfH @
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) "hfwj`U
Samuel is reading. I9 E@2[=!
27. exciting / excited。 RA6D dqT~
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 C\{4<:<_&
I am having many difficulties. （fault) !cZsIcI e
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. xn"g_2Hi
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 ^tv*I~>J!
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) {x8`gP\H
Please hurry up or well be late. XP7A.I#q0
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 2B4 c :jJ
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) b %kh:NV{S
Jealousy drove her to despair. J: LSGj;R
