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I like it very much. (true) <4n"LJ9
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 z'*"iaX<c
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) `~z[Hj=2
The price is right. &u~Pp=k v
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ *?\u5O(
What's your job? （fault) N<ux4t z
Are you working at the moment? ,}O33BwJp
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 iL2_ _TO
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4. 用英语怎么说？ OAD W;fj
How to say? （fault) ':3[?d1Es
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 >bd@2au9!
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) ~sZ$`t
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. U>OAtiq JX
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. cK >^8T^
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6. 我没有英文名。 R$+p4@?S
I haven't English name. （fault) z(>QGzyc
I don't have an English name. ,`02fMOLc
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 *{P/3yH
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. T@*'}*
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7. 我想我不行。 3H0B+F2XQ
I think I can't.（fault) ``eam8Az_U
I don't think I can. j ijwHL
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 YWs?2I
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 ]-9w'K d
I don't dance well too. （fault) fERO(o
I am not a very good dancer either. Xhq6l3 M
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 M9""(`U
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9. 现在几点钟了？ 5\=
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What time is it now? （fault) N .H<'Q8&
What time is it, please? /&<V5?1|
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 !/!ga)Y
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 Wa7wV
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My English is poor. （fault) ]<C]`W 2{
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. N #ZWW6
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. k}p8"'O
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 $dXx@6fP
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 -jy0Kl/p
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. Uqb]&2
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 Dk>6PBl
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ IR wtM'%0
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) .izq}q*P
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? #\ `kg#&
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 k_ !e5c
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12. 我没有经验。 <e?Eva%t`
I have no experience. （fault) CGzu(@dd\
I am I don't know much about that. 9^ZtbmUf
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. SJ<v< B
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13. 我没有男朋友。 fBctG~CJH
I have no boyfriend. （fault) b,YNCb ]H
I don't have a boyfriend. 3F@P$4!#l
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14. 他的身体很健康。 $xbW*w
His body is healthy. （fault) k}Q<#
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 pmvd%X\f
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) ~!5=o{wy
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16. 我们下了车。 ?h&?`WO (
We got off the car. u\L}B!
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17. 车速快了。 8\ !E )M|4
The speed of the car is fast. BjsT 9?6W/
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ (nt `8 0
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? a!E22k?((z
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） *$W&jfW
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） UUlz3" `
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. n\l?+)S *
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 m;]wKd"
I feel very painful in my right hand. Cp m T *
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 -]HZ?@
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) *
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 >*8V]{f9
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) SXZ9+<\
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. m]!hP^^
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 )/%5f{+}
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) +q '1P}e
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. 26rg-?;V^
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 kuy?n-1g
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. j *G: 8Lg
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. robg 1
24. 别理她。 \ agZ D+
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) T5."3 i
Leave her alone. 1.F&gP)9
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 LK~aLa5wG
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) 8ROKfPj;z
I learned a lot in university. p8_^6wf g
26. 黄山正在读书。 ]*\MIz{56'
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) tLTavE[@
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。
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I am having many difficulties. （fault) (Z(S?`')
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. $M 8& &M
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 Z|uvrFa
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) 3T F_$bd{
Please hurry up or well be late. { uaDpRt
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 Iz09O:ER
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) 1xW!j!A;
Jealousy drove her to despair. B/1j4/MS
