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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 U?rfE(!
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) 2Hd 6
The price is right. iN)@Cu7
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ F 4h EfO3
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Are you working at the moment? D\T L6"wo
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 ^:q(ksssY
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4. 用英语怎么说？ ILpB:g
How to say? （fault) J|b1
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Note：How to say是在中国最为泛滥成灾的中国式英语之一，这决不是地道的英语说法。同样的句子有：请问这个词如何拼写？How do you spell that please?请问这个单词怎么读？How do you pronounce this word? 7oWv'
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 t3WlVUtq3
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) L\B+j+~
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用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. uu/M XID
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6. 我没有英文名。 p$=3&qR 6
I haven't English name. （fault) OGVhb>LO1
I don't have an English name. T]myhNk
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 o4J K$%
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. -O HG1"/
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7. 我想我不行。 ,=ICSS~9l
I think I can't.（fault) Vz#cb5:g
I don't think I can. R'3i { 1
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 y^XwJX-f
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 WV6vM()#!C
I don't dance well too. （fault) 0<)8
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I am not a very good dancer either. +X&B'
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 Ry(!< w,
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9. 现在几点钟了？ B}jZ~/D}
What time is it now? （fault) O{4 m-;
What time is it, please? Ug"B/UUFd
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 hb_Ia]b
My English is poor. （fault) RWoiV10
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. }FK6o
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Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. vZKo&jU k
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 RDZq(r Kc
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 UO&S6M]v7
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. Ff,M ~ zn
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 b)V[d8IA
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ Rl)/[ T
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) oYF8:PYB
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? bZi>
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 _S[ H:b$?
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12. 我没有经验。 rd"]$_P8O
I have no experience. （fault) '5Y8 rv<
I am I don't know much about that. -py.Y Z
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. z#\Z|OK U
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13. 我没有男朋友。 G ;z2}Ei
I have no boyfriend. （fault) z(m*]kpL "
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14. 他的身体很健康。 6>"0H/y,
His body is healthy. （fault) lDH0bBmd0
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 qmK!d<4
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) "L ,FUo^&
The price is too high/ rather low. cVz.ac
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16. 我们下了车。 ?T^$,1 -
We got off the car. 6^zv:C%
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17. 车速快了。 06ueE\@Sg
The speed of the car is fast. )~5`A*Ku
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ ;6]+/e7O
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? *L ^{p.K4
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） =tP|s YR]^
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） )sL: iGU
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. CEUR-LK0
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 7Ua
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I feel very painful in my right hand. & .#0jb1r
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 2`lit@u&u
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) hA"N&v~
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 , :#prT[P"
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) K.cNx
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. <1@_MY o
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 F;z FKvn
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) D~1nh%x_
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. fb#Ob0H
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 {
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The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. ,og@}gOMB
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. |S4yol
24. 别理她。 -aO3/Ik [q
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) O,bj_CW x
Leave her alone. 5!5P\o
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 s=6w-'; V
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) }^QY<Cp|
I learned a lot in university. / fD)/x
26. 黄山正在读书。 xLGAP-mx]
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) P#yS ]F/
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27. exciting / excited。 eAl&[_o|S
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 #fFEo)YG
I am having many difficulties. （fault) 6 IvLr+I
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. ^+P]_< 43
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 ]v lQNd?
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) 2V
Please hurry up or well be late. {g);HnmPN
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 Ohjqdv@
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) MVTU$
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