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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 \gGTkH
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) V
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The price is right. =<X4LO)C
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 IOY<'t+
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4. 用英语怎么说？ ! JauMR
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 "..I$ R
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) Ae*
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用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. !>:]k ?$b
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6. 我没有英文名。 q4SEvP}fLx
I haven't English name. （fault) p^s:s-"f\
I don't have an English name. 0|| 5 r#
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 3 2p9(HQ
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. ,rX|_4 n*
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7. 我想我不行。 <q`| ,mc
I think I can't.（fault) GsoD^mjY
I don't think I can. V *W H
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 4t 0p!IxG
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 i,mZg+;w
I don't dance well too. （fault) Uka(Vr:
I am not a very good dancer either. q b$M.-\ne
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 $U"pdf
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9. 现在几点钟了？ &hJQHlyJM0
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What time is it, please? K.Y.K$NjP{
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 ] 4B&8n!
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 A&{eC
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My English is poor. （fault) x$z>.4
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. 'u9y\vUy
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. 9?uU%9r5P
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 6$t+Q~2G!
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 y;f nC5Q
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. r` sG!
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 X Hm6K1mGZ
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ -0+h&CO
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) 63VgQ
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13. 我没有男朋友。 }?*$AVs2q
I have no boyfriend. （fault) L0*f(H
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14. 他的身体很健康。 !?z " d
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 ^@ <Ia-x
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) D2f~*!vEnA
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17. 车速快了。 +A1xqOB
The speed of the car is fast. !.7m4mKzo
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ =00 sB
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? _Nf%x1m5s
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） =WK's8FB;8
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） Wf =hFc1_@
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. }^`5$HEi
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 NW` Mc&
I feel very painful in my right hand. REPI >-|
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 Y ^5RM
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) 8 -9<r
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 GmZ2a -M
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) J ykN EMB#
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. < Q6
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 b< BkI""b
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) GD4+f|1.*
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. LAuaowE\v
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 %Lom#:L'
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. (R!`Z%
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24. 别理她。 X]s="^
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) -u g -rdXV
Leave her alone. D 1(9/;9
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 HFX,EE
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) _+<AxE 9\
I learned a lot in university. G#3$sz
26. 黄山正在读书。 q)N^
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) vAtR\ Vh
Samuel is reading. Er|j\(jM
27. exciting / excited。 >iI_bcqF
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 kZ=yb-~
I am having many difficulties. （fault) K*5Ij]j&
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. Y r8gKhv W
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 S^r[%l<'n
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) .]/k#H v
Please hurry up or well be late. ?}No'E1!I
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 ygxaT"3"=
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) RggO|s+0;
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