1. I very like it （Fault） FjV)QP H
I like it very much. (true) Y+nk:9
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 c|s7 cG$+-
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) w `_"R6
The price is right. }!QVcu"+t/
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 ?p& ( Af)
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ BFswqp:
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Are you working at the moment? -8 Q}*Z
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 i9eE/
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4. 用英语怎么说？ ^i!I0Q2yd
How to say? （fault) vw6DHN)k
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 [w{x+ 6uX'
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) |ngv{g
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用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. ']U<R=5T$
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6. 我没有英文名。 S*V!t=
I haven't English name. （fault) q,T4-
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I don't have an English name. DCKH^J
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 M
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明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. Pos(`ys;
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7. 我想我不行。 \49s;\I]
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I don't think I can. 3QDz9KwCAw
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 ?$.JgG%Z+g
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 lf\x`3Vd
I don't dance well too. （fault) LnPG+<
I am not a very good dancer either. 1#KBf[0
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 nL+y"O
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9. 现在几点钟了？ g\1|<jb3
What time is it now? （fault) .u: aX$t+
What time is it, please? :6J&%n
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 sBa&]9>m
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 H'}6Mw%ra
My English is poor. （fault) jI%glO'2
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. *i VE O
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. (_=R<:
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 r 7FpR!
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 " R]wPF5u
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. '"T9y=9]s
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 ;_#<a*f
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ 1 s.>_
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) (0["|h32,
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? 7Y5.GW\^
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 N(%(B
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12. 我没有经验。 Of>2 m<
I have no experience. （fault) \. a 7F4h
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13. 我没有男朋友。 [lGxys)J
I have no boyfriend. （fault) B+z>$6
I don't have a boyfriend. /[A#iTe
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14. 他的身体很健康。 &WZ&Tt/)/
His body is healthy. （fault) R>B6@|}?
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 og&-P=4O
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) zUq(bD
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16. 我们下了车。 PMT} fg
We got off the car. 9"zp>VR
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17. 车速快了。 Va A. J
The speed of the car is fast. 3vdFO: j
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ <H$!OPV
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? 7^syu;DT9Y
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） t N4- <6
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以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. U4qk<!
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 yMt:L )+
I feel very painful in my right hand. 13pu{Xak
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 Ns]$+|
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) jig3M N
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 I%NeCd
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) S gssNv
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. )Y6\"-M[
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 {yDQncq'^
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) 33&l.[A"!}
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. lOM8%{.'_x
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 eAStpG" *
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. .osG" cS
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24. 别理她。 USa a #s4'
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) ) O&zb_{n
Leave her alone. q[ 9N4nj$<
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 r&IDTS#
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) DP;:%L}
I learned a lot in university. j+e~
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26. 黄山正在读书。 t+K 1ArQc
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) : ^U>n{
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27. exciting / excited。 C_JO:$\rE
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 K v)}
I am having many difficulties. （fault) Fv$A %6;W
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. PpH
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29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 {rK]Q! yj
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) +o): grWvQ
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30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 mX!*|$b s
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) sW B@'P:x
Jealousy drove her to despair. ([^#.x)hz
