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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 hVUh0XeO
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) ,f 3 pqi9|
The price is right. j$7|XM6
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 v=@TWEE
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ 8.A R.o
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Are you working at the moment? uo%P+om_}
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 -a,-J]d0+
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4. 用英语怎么说？ Yb3mP!3q8Z
How to say? （fault) GzXU U@p
How do you say this in English? ^!<dgBNj
Note：How to say是在中国最为泛滥成灾的中国式英语之一，这决不是地道的英语说法。同样的句子有：请问这个词如何拼写？How do you spell that please?请问这个单词怎么读？How do you pronounce this word? a 8k; (/
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 \wcam`f
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) {%lXY Myu
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. W]M)Q }:Y
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. {9Y+.46S
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6. 我没有英文名。 3 < ?
I haven't English name. （fault) X|f7 K
I don't have an English name. ]V l]XT$Um
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 vX0f ,y
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car.
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7. 我想我不行。 #6Fez`A
I think I can't.（fault) 'm1N/)F
I don't think I can. B~]5$-
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 Qd}m`YW-f$
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 >(uZtYM\j
I don't dance well too. （fault) y&} E~5O
I am not a very good dancer either. *4+3ObA
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 X[
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9. 现在几点钟了？ "k*PA\ U
What time is it now? （fault) g VQjL+_W
What time is it, please? Nkxm m/Z
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 0"2=n.##
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 *n" /a{6>
My English is poor. （fault) UcBe'r}G
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. \PDd$syDA
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. N I#X @
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 N H$r
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另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 \^ghd U
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. Dd;Nz
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 (?_S6H E
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ @1*ohdHH
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) +fvaUV_-
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? FZ!`B]]le,
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 H
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12. 我没有经验。 *
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I have no experience. （fault) |
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I am I don't know much about that. q0f3="
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13. 我没有男朋友。 U2uF&6v
I have no boyfriend. （fault) 9Gv[ 8'I
I don't have a boyfriend. 'YNT8w/3
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14. 他的身体很健康。 >:D
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 n6s}w w)
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) n 1!?"m!
The price is too high/ rather low. *OuStr \o
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16. 我们下了车。 aL IBD'z
We got off the car. 0a-: <zm
We got out of the car. /rUo{j
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17. 车速快了。 $<:E'^SAS
The speed of the car is fast. `PY>Hgb
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ TMY d4 7
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? A&nU]R8 S
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） gy&[?m6M=
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） W5SJ^,d)J
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. |V<h =D5W
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 v|U (+O
I feel very painful in my right hand. ZDbc
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 #1>X58I^
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) @)Ofi j
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 fk_o@
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I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) 5nsq[ Q`
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. ]Dw]p! @
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 6/rFHY2q
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) X7s
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Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. ^tXJj:wtS
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 a 'z)
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. +nJUFc
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. ~% YBI9$+
24. 别理她。 *zr(Z v
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) r$2P;Cxj
Leave her alone. A h Z8 0 !
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 N!g9 *Z
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) M bb x`
I learned a lot in university. Nm |!#(L
26. 黄山正在读书。 `ho1nY$)CE
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) O%FPS=
Samuel is reading. S#+h$UVh
27. exciting / excited。 *4V= z#
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 \h B5@e4i2
I am having many difficulties. （fault) uDEvzk42
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. hZ.Z3`v70
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 L:FoSCN Y(
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) 'nF2aD%A
Please hurry up or well be late. vd 8{c7g:n
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 0} b
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She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) ^<e.]F25M
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