1. I very like it （Fault） O9d"Z$~n=j
I like it very much. (true) SPd EO3
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 d9U)O6=
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) k ZF<~ U
The price is right. ]i6* $qgma
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ F.aG7
What's your job? （fault) N0^SWA|S
Are you working at the moment? jlF3LK)9q
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 G%l')e)9Gq
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4. 用英语怎么说？ v!ai_d^
How to say? （fault) sT!?nn3O`
How do you say this in English? s#aj5_G
Note：How to say是在中国最为泛滥成灾的中国式英语之一，这决不是地道的英语说法。同样的句子有：请问这个词如何拼写？How do you spell that please?请问这个单词怎么读？How do you pronounce this word? "u4x#7n|
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 hGrX,.zj
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) R\&z3<-S
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. 6pS}\aD
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. sCY
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6. 我没有英文名。 v@ GhwL
I haven't English name. （fault) ^?(#%~NS
I don't have an English name. }za pN
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Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 Y7g%nz[[
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. ,4'y(X <R
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7. 我想我不行。 ?yj g\S?L
I think I can't.（fault) !L pjTMYs
I don't think I can. F."Z CEb
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 e4Qjx*[G
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 T6\]*m lr
I don't dance well too. （fault) Pf%I6bVN9
I am not a very good dancer either. Z azs".
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 ^ swj!da
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9. 现在几点钟了？ CYE[$*g6y
What time is it now? （fault) x"C7NW[$
What time is it, please? R+K|K2"
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 S& IW]ffK
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 xYv;l\20.
My English is poor. （fault) l1<=3+d
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. ;8&/JS N M
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. wzx V)1jT
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 #W8?E_iu
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 }AB_i'C0
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. KGc.YUoE
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 J
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ %{ rb,6
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) zGz}.-F
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? wN%lc3[/z2
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 (G./P@/[
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12. 我没有经验。 nu1XT 1q1
I have no experience. （fault) oGI'a:iff
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13. 我没有男朋友。 )i:*r8*~
I have no boyfriend. （fault) O#[b NLV
I don't have a boyfriend. UNiK6h_%
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 (=WYi~2v
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) #*y.C[^5{
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16. 我们下了车。 e>c
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The speed of the car is fast. FF^h (Ea
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ V KYljY0#
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? b|Ge#o
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） C_q 2bI
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） oO3 ^9? Z
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. svxjad@l/
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 {4/*2IRN9h
I feel very painful in my right hand. >iK LC
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 3 i>NKS
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) @oH\r-jsgu
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 EJ <L,QH3
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) I Ij:3HP
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. W vu 1?
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 ,ZY\})`p
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) w<h8`K`3
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. LfW:G5 @-
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 q&?hwX
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The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. b~ * iL!<
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24. 别理她。 ^["D>@yIR
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) s.;' -oA
Leave her alone. r|u R!=*|?
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 N>a~k}pPH
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) ^q& Rl\
I learned a lot in university. N\. g+ W
26. 黄山正在读书。 "'Gq4<&y
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) F,VWi$Po\N
Samuel is reading. \/SOpC
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 Fz<1xyc(
I am having many difficulties. （fault) .9z}S=ZK
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. e2V;6N
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 ft@#[Bkx
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) Y?K?*`Pkc1
Please hurry up or well be late. <1lB[:@%U
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 37 ?X@@Z=
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) >f^kp8`3{Y
Jealousy drove her to despair. H l(W'>*oL
