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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 W Z`u"t^2V
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) M:i;;)cq
The price is right. Kt5;G UV
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ ^"N]i`dIF
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Are you working at the moment? H.#<&5f
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书
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4. 用英语怎么说？ (F9U`1~4
How to say? （fault) -)_"7}|u5
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 ]/>(C76
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) i Qs7L y"
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. ~kM# lh7At
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. J_) .H d
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6. 我没有英文名。 Bbk=0+ ^8I
I haven't English name. （fault) I\eM8`Y$
I don't have an English name. 2 )o T\m
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 Kppi
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明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. eP6`"<UM
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7. 我想我不行。 3gN#[P
I think I can't.（fault) P:,@2el
I don't think I can. >;I$&
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 \ !D <u'n
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 wJ
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I don't dance well too. （fault) $e>(M&9,
I am not a very good dancer either. d'Cn] <
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 iupuhq$ ]
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9. 现在几点钟了？ xx[XwN;
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What time is it, please? " tax
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 Qf0 ]7
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 -js:R+C528
My English is poor. （fault) ;VVKn=X=S=
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. :5`=9 _|
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. 3 sUTdCnNf
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 f'501MJu
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 -DWyKR= j"
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. oT9dMhx8
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 90ZMO7_
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ 9p| ;Hh:
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) PX7@3Y
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? X)P;UVR0
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 |^: A,%>
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12. 我没有经验。 R'M=`33M
I have no experience. （fault) Y| %s =0M
I am I don't know much about that. 3.[ fTrzJ
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. J0xV\O
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13. 我没有男朋友。 /Z':wu\
I have no boyfriend. （fault) 3QNu7oo
I don't have a boyfriend. |"t)#BUtL
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14. 他的身体很健康。 1<
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His body is healthy. （fault) U tb" 6_
He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. L;jzDng<
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 ,mkXU W
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) |%p;4b
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16. 我们下了车。 mar6/*`I#+
We got off the car. Ph{7S43
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17. 车速快了。 E ]T>m! 6
The speed of the car is fast. nd~cpHQR^
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ =E E>QM
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? =rH '
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当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） H[H+s!)"
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. +MHsdeGU1W
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 Kyn[4Bu!?
I feel very painful in my right hand. 'MF|(`
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 V]4g-
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He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) yiourR)H<
He looked at her in surprise . }#R
21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 suo;+T=`I
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) Vp"=8 p#k
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. ~f:y^`+Q[
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 {lNv Km)w
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) r
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23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 _f^JXd,7v
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. No Sq:e
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24. 别理她。 i!AFXVX
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) $-x@P9im
Leave her alone. }MW7,F
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 2=?:(e9
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) fv;3cxQp
I learned a lot in university. |<:Owd=
26. 黄山正在读书。 U"SH
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Samuel is reading a book. （fault) ,}8|[)"
Samuel is reading. )\xDo<@
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 \:7G1_o
I am having many difficulties. （fault) n:TW Z.9
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. r2t|,%%N7
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 x-hr64WFK
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) /y2)<{{I
Please hurry up or well be late. p'@| O q&
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 Y! 8 I
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) 3izGMH_`
Jealousy drove her to despair. sN"JVJXi
