1. I very like it （Fault） 7zVaj"N(
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 n+rAbn5o$
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) g*b%
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ I Js*zzR
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 R5r )01
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4. 用英语怎么说？ jkFS=eonK
How to say? （fault) >wdR4!x!?
How do you say this in English? `{N0+n
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 <!Nj2>
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) rV"<1y:g
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. ,@/b7BVv
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. ;q6: *H /
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6. 我没有英文名。 "T <Q#^m
I haven't English name. （fault) 9 vmH$
I don't have an English name. uz&CUvos
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 R6h(mPYA
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. I/Hwf
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7. 我想我不行。 p` B4 8TW
I think I can't.（fault) >9Fs)R]P
I don't think I can. |U Z#2
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 ]B :g<}5$4
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 )T(xQ2&r4
I don't dance well too. （fault) Jv1.Yz
I am not a very good dancer either. x!{5.#
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 iPa!pg4m
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9. 现在几点钟了？ Gz+Bk5#{
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 WT;=K0W6&
My English is poor. （fault) u !k\W{
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. S3MMyS8
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. LU ?X|{z
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 KY!
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 sI@m" A
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor.
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ !\}Dxt
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) ]~U4;
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12. 我没有经验。 ^IjKT
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I have no boyfriend. （fault) >e/ ;
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14. 他的身体很健康。 ua0`&,a3I
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 |[>`3p "&
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) \wCj$- ;Jt
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16. 我们下了车。 K,&)\r kzD
We got off the car. qmdl:J|?
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17. 车速快了。 z\pT nteO
The speed of the car is fast. NN\% X3ri"
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ pD9*WK Ef*
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? yc8iT`
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以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. [uT& sZxmg
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 L p 5LRw
I feel very painful in my right hand. >to NGGU=~
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 T6=c9f?7
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) RI!!?hYm
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 B# |w}hj
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) $ii/Q:w T"
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. gGxgU$`#c
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 @.yp IE\
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) 'v GrbmK
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. !>TVDN>
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 4`o_r%
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. 3!_y@sWx
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. *NS :X7p!V
24. 别理她。 ;2(8&.
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) - jfZLO4
Leave her alone. &?"( al?
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 ZN~:^,PO/
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) yd$_XW p?\
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26. 黄山正在读书。 !X$e;V"HX
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) dGt;t5An V
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 Rb
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29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 dZFf /BXU
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) qZ'&zB)
Please hurry up or well be late. c~3OK_k
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 2.{:PM4Z4
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) |Gx-c
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