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The price is very suitable for me. （fault) d3T7$'l$
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ 6OPN P0@r
What's your job? （fault) yfFe%8w_vw
Are you working at the moment? .1J`>T?=Q
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 S*3$1BTl
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4. 用英语怎么说？ p{r{}iYI
How to say? （fault) R~ TG5^(
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 G8^b9xoA+.
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用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. 5/m*Lc+r
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6. 我没有英文名。 Mwj7*pxUh
I haven't English name. （fault) {Y]3t9 !\
I don't have an English name. J[K>)@ I/
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 _A ]~`/0;`
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. #LwDs,J :
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7. 我想我不行。 l`JKQ k
I think I can't.（fault) =<= [E:B
I don't think I can. ,0>_(5
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 ?f:\&+.&
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 F
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I don't dance well too. （fault) 6ESS>I"su
I am not a very good dancer either. ^'sOWIzeiY
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 &j{I G`Trl
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9. 现在几点钟了？ f%YD+Dt_V
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What time is it, please? )=,;-&AR
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 +#'QP#
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 2b#> ~
My English is poor. （fault) z q#gf
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. ooYs0/,{
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. zfml^N
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 hM(Hq4ed,
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 Qcs0 w(
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. etP`q:6^c
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 = &U7:u
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ 5hiuBf<
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) zjx'nK{eI
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? QO,ge<N+N
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 % o0.8qVJi
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12. 我没有经验。 LA837%)
I have no experience. （fault) {+QQ<)l^tJ
I am I don't know much about that. jRjQDK_"ka
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. MP 8s }
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13. 我没有男朋友。 U3c !*i
I have no boyfriend. （fault) (]<G )+*
I don't have a boyfriend. SY2((!n._
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14. 他的身体很健康。 sE(mK<{pk
His body is healthy. （fault) pC)S 9Kl
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 P$;_YLr
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) vnz}Pr! c
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16. 我们下了车。 ;|K(6)
We got off the car. 3+ %L[fW`/
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17. 车速快了。 :w c.V
The speed of the car is fast. s0'Xih sw6
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ Dr"F5Wbg
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? gB#$"mq,
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当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） TqMy">>
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. 4dvuw{NZ
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 gLv";"4S
I feel very painful in my right hand. !O8vr4=
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 q|ZQsFZ
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) ^ S`c-N
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 j6$_U@)%O
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) !Lj+&D|z
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. K<tkNWasQ
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 8DNGqaH;dt
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) "PPn^{bYm
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. ~ +z'pK~c
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 I#hzU8Cc
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. [ 5kaF"
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. <?iwi[S
24. 别理她。 ag$UNV
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) lV !@h}mG
Leave her alone. $f<R j/`&
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 s"]L QM1|
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) ;-65~i0Iu
I learned a lot in university. 7":0CU% %
26. 黄山正在读书。 7J2i /m
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) g8w5X!Z
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 <:BhV82l
I am having many difficulties. （fault) +#y[sKa
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. L pdp'9>I
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 m)? cXM
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) eJ!a8
Please hurry up or well be late. 3AD^B\<gB
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 tpi63<N
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) e[8p /hId
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