1. I very like it （Fault） P&9&/0r=_
I like it very much. (true) Y-:dPc{
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 q-d#b KIf
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) [|oOP $u
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Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 IM&l%6[).
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ s7na!A[
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Are you working at the moment? +>o}
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 ]MV=@T^8#
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4. 用英语怎么说？ 0z=^_Fb
How to say? （fault) '645Fr[lg
How do you say this in English? WR fhxl
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 ./E<v
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用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. `ouCQ]tKz
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6. 我没有英文名。 5TVA1
I haven't English name. （fault) jmh$6 N%
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I don't have an English name. J nf@u
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 8z'_dfP=5
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. ttA0*
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7. 我想我不行。 l *>, :y
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I don't think I can. {N 0i
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Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 Vh5Z'4 N
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 E3,Nc`'m9
I don't dance well too. （fault) Xmaj7*f>p
I am not a very good dancer either. \tZZn~ex
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 ) E (9
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9. 现在几点钟了？ #tQ__ V
What time is it now? （fault) `{W>Dy
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 ?cD2EX%(
My English is poor. （fault) >p@v'h/Cr
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. Pvu*Y 0_p
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. CWS&f
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当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 ca!DZ%y
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 )0p7d:%mV
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. o<nkK+=Afm
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 QPT%CW61M
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ n6s[q- td
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) = s$UU15
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Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 g|PRk9
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12. 我没有经验。 S
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I am I don't know much about that. *Z
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Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. Hlye:.$
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13. 我没有男朋友。 bO\E )%zp
I have no boyfriend. （fault) l!Yj Dm{E
I don't have a boyfriend. T9=55tpG9
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His body is healthy. （fault) ^=V b'g3P~
He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. Y <EdFzle
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 W2G@-`,
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) B gB]M3Il
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16. 我们下了车。 DQRr(r~2Kj
We got off the car. yi$ Jk}w
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17. 车速快了。 +1Ua`3dWN_
The speed of the car is fast. pX v@ QD#!
The car is speeding. Or 揟he car is going too fast.? i #W0
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ UpIt"+d2&
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? yCLDJ%8
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） $MB /j6 #j
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） /agX! E4s
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. l!^+Xeg~
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 J_ S]j E{
I feel very painful in my right hand. 3ZEV*=+T5
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 ri?>@i-9=
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) [>N`)]fP
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 ui$JQ _P
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) <qp D Az4k
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. a p[{`u
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 j9G1
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Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) GN%|'eU
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. 38B h9>c3
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 DsZBhjCB
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. a= *qsgPGL
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. pk,]yi,ZF
24. 别理她。 ,]UCq?YW)T
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) GIGC,zP@k
Leave her alone. ,
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25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 //_aIp
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) Q7vTTn \
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26. 黄山正在读书。 mqFo`Ee
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) 7@*l2edXm+
Samuel is reading. E=9xiS
27. exciting / excited。 UZ` <D/
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 +^\TG>le
I am having many difficulties. （fault) 1ehl=WN
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. t'pY~a9F
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 ]&mN~$+C
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) uO,9h0y0W
Please hurry up or well be late. 6*]g~)7`Q~
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 q ;<=MO/
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) Sl RQi:
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