1. I very like it （Fault） Bk&ry)`gD
I like it very much. (true) w,dDA2,
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 rvZXK<@#+
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) Zr, :i
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The price is right. G2Eke;
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ ~"89NVk"
What's your job? （fault) $pK2H0c
Are you working at the moment? g+oSbC
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 _p/
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4. 用英语怎么说？ !6hUTjhW7z
How to say? （fault) _,:gSD W|
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 A{mv[x-XN
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) [V_Z9-f*
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. bhaIi>W~G
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. Lu!o! >b
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6. 我没有英文名。 jovI8Dw
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I haven't English name. （fault) UN'[sHjOnD
I don't have an English name. 6 ('2.^8
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 ?zW 4|0
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. Vo^
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7. 我想我不行。 ,h,DB=!K<
I think I can't.（fault) /1ZRjf^
I don't think I can. cl
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Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 Lu,72i0O ^
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 9~i=Af@
I don't dance well too. （fault) Jhdo#}Ub
I am not a very good dancer either. R 7u &`
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 $d 2mcwh\
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9. 现在几点钟了？ SoX\S|}%6[
What time is it now? （fault) lt\.
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What time is it, please? F]kn4zr
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 %fB]N
My English is poor. （fault) ^$-ID6
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. ` 6 a
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. b_2b g>|;
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 gE$D#PZa
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 xi|T7,\X
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. c :(Xk zj
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 LUSBRr8
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ (/TYET_H
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) xwK{}==U
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? 3Au3>q,
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 SPfz/ q{
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12. 我没有经验。 m{T:<:q~
I have no experience. （fault) ,MH/ lQq%
I am I don't know much about that.
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Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. *HiN:30DZ
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I don't have a boyfriend. '/l<\b/E
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14. 他的身体很健康。 4 #?Sxs
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 8NCu ;s
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) ! R@v\Eu
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16. 我们下了车。 a`/\0~
We got off the car. >Pa&f20 Hp
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17. 车速快了。 miWog 8j
The speed of the car is fast. {v CB$@/o
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ .8[*`%K>
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? tZ|0wPp
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） )wT @`p"4
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） _,r2g8qm
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. d2'1
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 :Y4 m3|
I feel very painful in my right hand. JTg:3<L
My right hand is very painful. Or ? My right hand hurts(aches).? T,G38
20. 他看到她很惊讶。 pE&'Xr#P>
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) -d'swx2aZ!
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 ZQ@ Ul
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) :{7gZ+*
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. ?rauhTVnJ
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 @J~hi\&`
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) LR`]C]
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. MKiP3kt8
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 C[X2]zr
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. M%{,?a0V
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. U+[ p>iP
24. 别理她。 Go;fQ yG
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) GN0s`'#"3%
Leave her alone. 3.0t 5F<B
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 pUV4oyGV
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) Uw!N;QsC
I learned a lot in university. rJz`v/ :|P
26. 黄山正在读书。 #!yW)RG
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) 5` >%{ o
Samuel is reading. gXy'@ !
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 a+!r5689
I am having many difficulties. （fault) LZ'Y3 *
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. G!<-9HA5
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 Sm5 T/&z
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) BQ o$c~
Please hurry up or well be late. b+/z,c6w
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 PNgdWf3
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) S:=
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Jealousy drove her to despair. !_i;6UVG
