1. I very like it （Fault） H^J waF
I like it very much. (true) @mm~i~~KA
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 u0i;vO)MNt
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) mNdEn<W
The price is right. X{-901J1
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 a<Ksas'5S
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ m5kt
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 ;pVnBi
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4. 用英语怎么说？ yd~}CF
How to say? （fault) b X'.hHR
How do you say this in English? |L%d^m
Note：How to say是在中国最为泛滥成灾的中国式英语之一，这决不是地道的英语说法。同样的句子有：请问这个词如何拼写？How do you spell that please?请问这个单词怎么读？How do you pronounce this word? mb #&yK(h
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 OiJz?G:m
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) *sYvV,
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. ~F^7L5d}C
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. &p83X
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6. 我没有英文名。 bO6LBSZx]
I haven't English name. （fault) 2Nvb Q 3c5
I don't have an English name. rlP?Uh
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 1<$z-y'
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. 'l&bg 8K9
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7. 我想我不行。 jQ& 82X%m
I think I can't.（fault) ~xakz BE
I don't think I can. 0o_wy1O1,
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 C)qy=lx%
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 kCvf-;b
I don't dance well too. （fault) z=pGu_`2
I am not a very good dancer either. xG~7kj3
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 `Yw:<w\4C
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9. 现在几点钟了？ fYUbr"Oe
What time is it now? （fault) _8 ubo\M~
What time is it, please? Pt[ b;}
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 1/ <Z6 ?U
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 T%[!m5
My English is poor. （fault) Wj"GS!5
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. qfa[KD)!aB
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. xXfFi5Eom
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 =5u;\b>*
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 E)]RQ~jY?
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. vR?E'K 3
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 6y
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ *7G5\[gI$
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) ]5sU =\
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Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 WN3] xw3
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12. 我没有经验。 .qg 2zE$0
I have no experience. （fault) tq&CJv J4
I am I don't know much about that. YW'l),Z
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. TT3\c ,cs
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13. 我没有男朋友。 *D:uFo,xn
I have no boyfriend. （fault) f&88 N<)
I don't have a boyfriend. K\y
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14. 他的身体很健康。 Ah Rvyj
His body is healthy. （fault) Y rmd
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He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. z-G*:DfgH
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The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) #bmbK{ [
The price is too high/ rather low. 5[|Z ceY
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16. 我们下了车。 _8&a%?R@ W
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17. 车速快了。 )POU58$
The speed of the car is fast. l } WvO]
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？
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Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? ).8NZ
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是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） N.dcQQ_iS
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以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not.
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 }-T
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I feel very painful in my right hand. 8<PQ31
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 JV@b(x`
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) 3B?7h/f
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 >\'gI I s
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) -I.BQ
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. \vF*n Z5/
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 ujh`&GiB+
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) Eu`K2_b
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. ~ As_O6JI
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 &{ZTtK&JF
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. rH9[x8e
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. !]l;n
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24. 别理她。 +
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Don't pay attention to her. （fault) qv)%)n
Leave her alone. v?s%qb= T
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 _NN5e|t
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) OpLUmn
I learned a lot in university. A+ LX37B
26. 黄山正在读书。 2!? =I'uMA
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) 8 ] &\FA 8
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27. exciting / excited。 A?" / >LM
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 #BwOWra
I am having many difficulties. （fault) G!E1 N(%o
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. lX/ :e=
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 U[ |o!2$
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) !+_X q$9_
Please hurry up or well be late. <b_?[%(u
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 Jp-6]uW
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) `qhZZ{s)1U
Jealousy drove her to despair. ca,U>'(y
