1. I very like it （Fault） O3V. 4tp
I like it very much. (true) O _ C<h
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 )K8 ^}L,
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) +Wl]1
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The price is right. uO>x"D5tZ:
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 7Ll? #eun
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ p()q)P
What's your job? （fault) H_ a ##z
Are you working at the moment? 97[wz C,
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4. 用英语怎么说？ ^7uXpqQBr
How to say? （fault) 3:O| p[2)L
How do you say this in English? aGOS 9
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 /d+v4GIB
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) w~_ycY.e
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. 2 OV$M~
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. *
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6. 我没有英文名。 Wks zN h
I haven't English name. （fault) ] x).C[^
I don't have an English name. &zd@cr 1
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 [p' A?-
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. 7;c^*"Ud
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7. 我想我不行。 <ne?;P1L
I think I can't.（fault) H<}|n1w<
I don't think I can. ? H!jKX
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 N d ]RbX
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 y #C9@C
I don't dance well too. （fault) H,W8JNPs
I am not a very good dancer either. <)pPq+
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 ^rs{1S
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9. 现在几点钟了？ mU(v9Jpf7
What time is it now? （fault) rizjH+
What time is it, please? MQDLC7Y.p5
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 7O8 @T-f+2
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 $vK,Gugcx
My English is poor. （fault)
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I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. wpp!H< ')
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. \03<dUA6
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 }Ml BmD
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 \[qxOZ{
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. %y\5L#T!>
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 [MQ* =*
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ "uP*pR^
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) -[J4nN &N
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? !4!qHJISa
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 mZXtHFMu
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12. 我没有经验。 }t"K(oamm
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I am I don't know much about that. R| ^bZf^
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. 8KN 3|)
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13. 我没有男朋友。 H)h^|A/vO
I have no boyfriend. （fault) *DvX|| `&
I don't have a boyfriend. g-jg;Ri
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14. 他的身体很健康。 St(jrZb
His body is healthy. （fault) q"@ #FS
He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy.
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 6&5D4
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The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault)
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16. 我们下了车。 %I9f_5BlT8
We got off the car. z R'EQ
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17. 车速快了。 `&.qHw)
The speed of the car is fast. ?-%(K^y4r
The car is speeding. Or 揟he car is going too fast.? [E%g3>/mt
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ z .\r7
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? ]b]J)dDI
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） glc<(V
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以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. =- ~))!(
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 q5S_B]|
I feel very painful in my right hand. mR1b.$
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 IiRQ-,t1
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) y$bY
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 5-ED\ -
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) {tl{ j1d |
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. _ yJz: pa
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 ?<B I)[B
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) %'i_iF 8.
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. _&\'Va$
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 QcX\z \'vg
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. K!qOO
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. ]" e'z
24. 别理她。 KQb&7k .
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) V_ , `?>O
Leave her alone. iPV-w_HQ
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 &]LpG l
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) H c@_@G
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26. 黄山正在读书。 & zB>
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) ja~Dp5
Samuel is reading. ! [1a P,
27. exciting / excited。 R&6@*Nn
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 $M4Z_zle)
I am having many difficulties. （fault) rQlQ^W$=?
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. +TA~RC d
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 7P(jMalq
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) v4Rci^ 8
Please hurry up or well be late. 9B;WjXSe
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 jI r\ .i
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) ||*F. p
Jealousy drove her to despair. #:N#i
