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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 \uumNpB*n
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) AX Y.8 0+
The price is right. T4O H,^J
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ jAa{;p"j U
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Are you working at the moment? w/L^w50pt
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4. 用英语怎么说？ Mp V 3.
How to say? （fault) %7X<:f|N8x
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Note：How to say是在中国最为泛滥成灾的中国式英语之一，这决不是地道的英语说法。同样的句子有：请问这个词如何拼写？How do you spell that please?请问这个单词怎么读？How do you pronounce this word? $Vi[195]2
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 J H%^FF2
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) [|=#~(yYQ
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用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. e~#"#?
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6. 我没有英文名。 IZ$7'Mo86
I haven't English name. （fault) BVKr 2v
I don't have an English name. "5KJ /7q!
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。
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明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. t8 "*j t
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7. 我想我不行。 +s*OZ6i [
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Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 fkprTk^#
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 D # $Fj
I don't dance well too. （fault) BZ] 6W/0
I am not a very good dancer either. {*=+g>R gD
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 UBmD
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9. 现在几点钟了？ jm-J_o;}z6
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What time is it, please?
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 B? Vr9H 7n
My English is poor. （fault) sHqs)@D
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. fp jy[$8
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. *^BW[C/CTR
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 6m.ChlO/
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 "[P xLq5
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. Zu4|1 W
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Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) %idn7STJ}
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? 1]yOC)u"i
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12. 我没有经验。 m;=wQYFr{I
I have no experience. （fault) Mp *S +Plp
I am I don't know much about that. IL:d`Kbqf
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. xiu?BP ?V
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13. 我没有男朋友。 kOe %w-_
I have no boyfriend. （fault) >&@hm4
I don't have a boyfriend. `1c Gb *b/
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14. 他的身体很健康。 3: ">]LMi
His body is healthy. （fault) } {! #` 's
He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. [0_JS 2KE
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The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) 9Tgl/}q)
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We got off the car. H-?wEMi)*u
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The speed of the car is fast. "4VC:" $ f
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ x=+R0ny
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? a,o>E4#c
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） _xg4;W6M=
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） }pE8G#O&
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. \htL\m^$9
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 R^%uEP
I feel very painful in my right hand. *cjH]MQ0Ak
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。
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He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) OH.Re6Rr
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 zeq P:goy
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) IrJPP2Q
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. i|'M'^3r
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 &cjE+
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) y-UutI&
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. Zk#^H*jg x
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 z3l= aAw8
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. &*G+ -cF
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. <Tq&Va_w
24. 别理她。 0nko n3H
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) -rU~
Leave her alone. *wNX<R .
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 ryz
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I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) #z|\AmZ\
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26. 黄山正在读书。 ^y@ RfM=A
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) ~<M/<%o2*
Samuel is reading. sGNVZx
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 9N H"Ik*
I am having many difficulties. （fault) 6 E9y[ %+
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. <Sxsmf0"
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 _Qy3A T~
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) Sz\"*W;>
Please hurry up or well be late. @w1@|"6vF
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 | v?
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She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) D RldRm/
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