1. I very like it （Fault） X;I9\Cp]!
I like it very much. (true) /|0-O''
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 s ey,J5?
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) \ vA*dQ-
The price is right. hYW9a`Ht/
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ Qm%PpQ^Lz3
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Are you working at the moment? J usU5 e|
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4. 用英语怎么说？ S I}s
How to say? （fault) E/zf9\
How do you say this in English? r]3-}:vU
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 \ 2\{c1df
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) >+2&7u
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用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. >P/36'
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6. 我没有英文名。 - -5F*a{R|
I haven't English name. （fault) [l23b{
I don't have an English name. q(KjhM
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 0fs VbC
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. - vvyG
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7. 我想我不行。 #<*Vc6pC
I think I can't.（fault) AC,RS 7
I don't think I can. -o ).<&#
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 FdU]!GO- X
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 Z8|< %1Kge
I don't dance well too. （fault)
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I am not a very good dancer either. *1)>He$qL
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 8u[_t.y4m
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9. 现在几点钟了？ 51|ky-
What time is it now? （fault)
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What time is it, please? [YDSS/
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 B~]Kqp7yU
My English is poor. （fault)
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I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. j ZXa
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Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. aO' #!k*R
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 )^j_O^T5
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 um2 a#6u o
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. 8 x{Owj:Q
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 .biq)L e
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ ?
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Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) ]E`<8hRB
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? Pe,>ny^J1
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12. 我没有经验。 zx.qN
I have no experience. （fault) wI.aV>
I am I don't know much about that. S=UuEmU5N
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13. 我没有男朋友。 !_Lmrs
I have no boyfriend. （fault) ZEqW*piI
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14. 他的身体很健康。 A}9Z%U
His body is healthy. （fault) f}:C~L!
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 `[/#, *\
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) <L}@p8Lq
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16. 我们下了车。 8!_jZ f8
We got off the car. gQnr.
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17. 车速快了。 \""^'pP@
The speed of the car is fast. ;: ;E|{e
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ 1/DtF
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以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. (v]%kXy/G
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 "zEl2Xn28_
I feel very painful in my right hand. 4 Gu'WbJ
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 B% F]K<
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) L}Z.Fq J
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 A l$z.i?R
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) %>|FJ
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. Eb3 ZM#
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 o_:v?Y>0
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) )%(ZFn}
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. u6|C3 ,!z"
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 V DFgu
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. ^C>kmo3J
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. te@m#` p9
24. 别理她。 T;w:^XW
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) yV^Yp= f_
Leave her alone. Y >x{ [er
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 EC+t-:a]
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) CK_d Eh2c
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26. 黄山正在读书。 q;{(o2g
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) bt}8ymcG
Samuel is reading. >* -I Io
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 K~(RV4oF8B
I am having many difficulties. （fault) ~f<'] zXv
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29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 2yN!y IPR
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) 15:9JVH3D
Please hurry up or well be late. !0{SVsc )
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 ]kj^T?&n.
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) XC<fNK
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