1. I very like it （Fault） "6yiQ\`J
I like it very much. (true) ap^=CEf
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 6# ";W2
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) h&bV !M
The price is right. >UY_:cW4%m
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 9M]"%E!s
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ J ~3T8e#
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Are you working at the moment? #<Nvy9
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 hx VM]e[
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4. 用英语怎么说？ ==1/N{{R
How to say? （fault) i8_x1=A
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Note：How to say是在中国最为泛滥成灾的中国式英语之一，这决不是地道的英语说法。同样的句子有：请问这个词如何拼写？How do you spell that please?请问这个单词怎么读？How do you pronounce this word? oxQID
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 WgJAr73
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Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. ;&6PL] /d
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. ;-pvc<_c<
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6. 我没有英文名。 q YZ7Zt;
I haven't English name. （fault) Q5nyD/k4c
I don't have an English name. F9P 0cGDs
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 4> VZk^%b#
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. yVHl T
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7. 我想我不行。 d[e: }1
I think I can't.（fault) 07Q[L'}y@
I don't think I can. FJ~_0E#L
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 ^FM9} t/U,
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 s9kL B.
I don't dance well too. （fault) q 'F_ j"
I am not a very good dancer either. yj'' \
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 19 wqD IE0
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9. 现在几点钟了？ $;uWj|
What time is it now? （fault) ; [%}Xx
What time is it, please? }u_EXP8M
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 8@yc}~8 *
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 ht3T{ 4qCS
My English is poor. （fault) B9I Xa;
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. * \o$-6<
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. N~;
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当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 hL bT\J`I
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 %}MA5 t]o
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. ;%7XU~<a
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 j%Z{.>mJ
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ zLw h6^?Y
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) M=[q+A
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12. 我没有经验。 m>+,^`0
I have no experience. （fault) w$lfR ,
I am I don't know much about that. 4nII/cPG
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13. 我没有男朋友。 > }DjHLTW\
I have no boyfriend. （fault) ~"q,<t
I don't have a boyfriend. 37 O#aJ,K
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14. 他的身体很健康。 {8#N7(%z
His body is healthy. （fault) `+hy#1]
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 =F %wlzF:
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) YKe0:cWc
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16. 我们下了车。 }.MoDR3\
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17. 车速快了。 =EcIXDzC>
The speed of the car is fast. rX! +@>4_L
The car is speeding. Or 揟he car is going too fast.? 1 x\V dT
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ o7Cnyy#:
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? >2l Ay:B5
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） ~w 1{ zxs
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） uZ/7t(fy
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. N{^>MRK=5
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 n=G>y7b
I feel very painful in my right hand. BK(pJNBh
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 xS~yH [k
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) D]pK=247
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 b#p~F}qT
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) rKzv8d
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. ayH%
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22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 |
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Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) fXu~69_
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. P 34LV+e
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 yZ;k@t_WRD
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. `rz`3:ZH
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood.
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24. 别理她。 6VH90KAT
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) v ?Yd LR
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25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 eg$5z
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I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) Z SF=
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26. 黄山正在读书。 8K@"B
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) B:3+' , i1
Samuel is reading. xm}q6>jRV
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 /$FXg;h9$
I am having many difficulties. （fault) 4-]Do?
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. -7-Fd_ F8
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 BrNG%%n
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault)
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Please hurry up or well be late. ?AV &@EX2C
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 hl6,#2$
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) r^w\9a_
Jealousy drove her to despair. 6( N.T+;]
