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I like it very much. (true) K7wU
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 ,iXQ"):!OB
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) L$v<t/W
The price is right. j eyGI Y
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ j8;U ny9
What's your job? （fault) X}`39r.
Are you working at the moment? Uz%2{HB@{
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 $ J!PSF8PL
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4. 用英语怎么说？ > ~ L0M
How to say? （fault) ;Swy5z0=ro
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Note：How to say是在中国最为泛滥成灾的中国式英语之一，这决不是地道的英语说法。同样的句子有：请问这个词如何拼写？How do you spell that please?请问这个单词怎么读？How do you pronounce this word? L+8O
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5. 明天我有事情要做。
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I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) I? _WV_T&
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. x; A.Ll
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. "%#CMCE|f
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6. 我没有英文名。 LR3>_t
I haven't English name. （fault) q2*1Gn9!j
I don't have an English name. $J#Z`%B^y
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 ,@\z{}~v
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. e <+b?@}=B
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7. 我想我不行。 jO m7:+H
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I don't think I can. C]Q}HI#G
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 P 2)/!+`a
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 W#\{[o
I don't dance well too. （fault) 9V >C %I
I am not a very good dancer either. v1=N?8Hz1
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 Cng_*\=O
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9. 现在几点钟了？ |\W~+}'g~
What time is it now? （fault)
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 `x;m@\R
My English is poor. （fault) c[Z#q*Q
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. HQMug
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. /z :1nq
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 o $'K}U
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 0S$TLbx
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. nX8ulGG s
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ PW\me7iCz
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) ,s/laZ)V
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? FcyF E~>2
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 "^wIixOH5
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12. 我没有经验。 ??lsv(v-
I have no experience. （fault) t :~,7
I am I don't know much about that. MHJR Bn{}
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13. 我没有男朋友。 #Y'ewu;qJ
I have no boyfriend. （fault) p-H}NQ\
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14. 他的身体很健康。
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The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) $:&b5=i
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16. 我们下了车。 taMcm}*T1
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The speed of the car is fast. UhJ!7Ws$
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ <'\!
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? 7spZ e"
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当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） 204"\ mv
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. #qv!1$}2
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 1DGl[k/zv
I feel very painful in my right hand. Z[>fFg~N4
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 ')/w +|F
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) 6OqF-nso[E
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 .[Qi4jm>`
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) \fp'=&tp~a
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. cp0yr:~
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 ~(B%E'
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) "=LeHY=9
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. KtArV
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 c'mg=jH
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. \:+ NVIN
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. =woP~+
24. 别理她。 <p-@XzyE
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) :jC$$oC].
Leave her alone.
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25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 Q<KF<K'0hg
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) GMB3`&qh
I learned a lot in university. e wWw
26. 黄山正在读书。 gtT&97tT<
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) GVfRy@7n
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 1.TIUH1
I am having many difficulties. （fault) &Pc.[k
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29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 7|jy:F,w%
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) cI/ }r Z+
Please hurry up or well be late. b"nkF\P@Fj
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 f1sp6S0V\
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) $4qM\3x0,
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