1. I very like it （Fault） X E 9)c
I like it very much. (true) sf`PV} a1
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 yI8 SQ$w0y
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) =f>HiF
The price is right. B={/nC}G~
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 kl"
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ C` pp
What's your job? （fault) O@s{uZ|A6
Are you working at the moment? N[pZIH5ho=
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 Y)|~:& tZ
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4. 用英语怎么说？ 2B^~/T<\
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 | H 8^
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) I~)cYl:|G
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. &&WDo(r3
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. 5:UyUB
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6. 我没有英文名。 W2`.RF^
I haven't English name. （fault) 7,*%[#-HE
I don't have an English name. >V(zJ
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 |Ab{H%
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. i bXe"X/_
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7. 我想我不行。 RX'-9 9 M
I think I can't.（fault) w:}C8WKw
I don't think I can. QQF f 5^
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 SG:bM7*1'
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 34ha26\np
I don't dance well too. （fault) vI Vr@1S
I am not a very good dancer either. 9x? B5Ap[
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 }p=g*Zo*C;
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9. 现在几点钟了？ %(`#A.yaE
What time is it now? （fault) bg}+\/78#
What time is it, please? jq(qo4~;
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 0 " y%9
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 d8E,o7$m
My English is poor. （fault) |g<* Rk0
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. i ?;R}%~
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. {^J!<k,R\;
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 ]d G\j^e|
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 T1W:>~T5#
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. b #/i.!:a
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ !,Nwts>m
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) R"3
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Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? 'tm$q /&
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12. 我没有经验。 ;wR ' z$8
I have no experience. （fault) .wy$-sG81
I am I don't know much about that. WDkuB
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13. 我没有男朋友。 /ZW &0 E
I have no boyfriend. （fault) _9@ >;]
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14. 他的身体很健康。 J -V49X#
His body is healthy. （fault) "'a* [%
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 u[")*\ CP
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) S@xXq{j
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16. 我们下了车。 RV+E^pkp$
We got off the car. u1Ek y/e-
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17. 车速快了。 ]6&$|2H?Ni
The speed of the car is fast. mI7~c;~
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ aXY -><
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? 88lxHoPV
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当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） A\AT0th
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. Y] N,.pv=
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 `uo, __y
I feel very painful in my right hand. ;AIc?C g
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 sbo^"&%w
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) WR#0<cz(
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 347eis'
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) y'} O)lO1
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. T9syo/ (
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 3s*(uS(
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) W3rl^M=r
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23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 + G;LX'B
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. iY0>lDFm.
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. aWy]9F &C:
24. 别理她。 z ; Q<F
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) ` ;)ZGY\
Leave her alone. o.7{O,v
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 {gs dG-
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) 0F:1\9f5
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26. 黄山正在读书。 P0Z! ?`e=M
Samuel is reading a book. （fault)
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 :I 1_ X
I am having many difficulties. （fault) \or G63T:
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. .*YD&(
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 ycAKK ?O*
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) a9U_ug58
Please hurry up or well be late. )92r {%N
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 o[1ylzk}+
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) 8K"+,s(%R
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