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I like it very much. (true) UF-&L:s[
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 ,# 2~<
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) 7(}' jZ
The price is right. Y"lE MY
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ BL&AZv/T
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Are you working at the moment? YYpC!)
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 u\ _yjv#
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4. 用英语怎么说？ {D[6=\ F
How to say? （fault) k9%o{Uz y
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 :\[l~S
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) (RFH .iX
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. %*Ex2we&
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. f-18nF7{
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6. 我没有英文名。 3Y Mqp~4
I haven't English name. （fault) sT;wHtU
I don't have an English name. Y\9}LgIvr
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 pVc+}Wzh
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. Qs\a&Q=0H
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7. 我想我不行。 jJIP $
I think I can't.（fault) N# }A9t
I don't think I can. v,iZnANZ&P
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 8?iI;(
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 5,
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I don't dance well too. （fault)
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I am not a very good dancer either. JlYZ \
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 @< P2di
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9. 现在几点钟了？ wH?) ZL
What time is it now? （fault) + ,Krq 3P
What time is it, please? l/={aF7+
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 P<IDb%W
My English is poor. （fault) Qa,=
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. G% sq;XT61
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. :^ywc O
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 o MJ `_
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 eyK xnBz
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. X.>=&~[
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 X7!q/1$J
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ w W\[#Ku
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) Zp)=l Td
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12. 我没有经验。 f|,Kh1{e
I have no experience. （fault) 2]vTedSOl
I am I don't know much about that. %)7t2D
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13. 我没有男朋友。 Hk*1Wrs*
I have no boyfriend. （fault) e' M&Eh
I don't have a boyfriend. Imv#7{ndq
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14. 他的身体很健康。 cTGd<
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The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) U5kKT.M
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16. 我们下了车。 +4-T_m/W /
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The speed of the car is fast. XSC=qg$
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ iv >MIdI m
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? _;03R {e*
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） ZxNTuGOB:
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以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. EQ273sdK
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 R1H^CJ=v0
I feel very painful in my right hand. *#YZm >h
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 ~Fuq{e9`
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) XY| y1L 3[
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 f7a4E +}
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) gbuh04#~
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. Jx5` 0?
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 J>
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) Ef#LRcG-Z
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. Fs~(> w@
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 0 cycnOd
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. gQr+ ~O
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24. 别理她。 ZHK>0>;
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) ;Xt <\^e
Leave her alone. % [$HX'Y
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 7,SQz6]
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) gNEcE9y 2
I learned a lot in university. Oin9lg -jR
26. 黄山正在读书。 (j'\h/
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) r""rJzFz'
Samuel is reading. !uGfS' Vl
27. exciting / excited。 Q7uJ9 Y{X
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 96 ^aI1:
I am having many difficulties. （fault) nW)+-Wxq
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29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 &q>8 D'
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) e\C-a4[C8P
Please hurry up or well be late. dQ8RrD=$&
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 U:TkO=/>:
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) {T-\BTh&Q
Jealousy drove her to despair. Qx4)'n
