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I like it very much. (true) 6F8T iR &
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 S\dG>F>S
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) ya'Ma<4
The price is right. B"Hz)-MW
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 b'1m
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ 8c3/n
What's your job? （fault) N# <X"&-_#
Are you working at the moment? UY}EW`$#m
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 /)*si
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4. 用英语怎么说？ HrS- o=
How to say? （fault) Min {&?a
How do you say this in English? I1 +A$<Fa
Note：How to say是在中国最为泛滥成灾的中国式英语之一，这决不是地道的英语说法。同样的句子有：请问这个词如何拼写？How do you spell that please?请问这个单词怎么读？How do you pronounce this word? 9'Cu9nR
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 C1w6[f1+
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) ,~G:>q$ad
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. Q>g-xe 1
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. 3 S=$n g
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6. 我没有英文名。 's\rQ- TV
I haven't English name. （fault) %% + @s
I don't have an English name. h )% e
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 P/,ezVb=
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. FG5YZrONx
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7. 我想我不行。 O^DLp/vM
I think I can't.（fault) fi
I don't think I can. i it 5IV
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 &~ '^;hy=
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 )u=46EU_
I don't dance well too. （fault) U&o ~U] rm
I am not a very good dancer either. hH]oJ}H \
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 t; b1<TLn0
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9. 现在几点钟了？ >>T,M@s-:
What time is it now? （fault) nU2 3D@l
What time is it, please? ?6V U4nK/*
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 /}Ct 2w&<k
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 @g] >D
My English is poor. （fault) S76x EL
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. $VJE&b
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. "\O{ !Hj8
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 J?/NJ-F
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 6 g)X&pZ
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. j)mi~i*U
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 ?OBB)hj
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ G 7k.YtW
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) bW2Msv/H
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? :a *F>S!
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 LM*m> n*
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12. 我没有经验。 +a|u,'u
I have no experience. （fault) a sL!@YE
I am I don't know much about that. > a)6GZ@
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. F>U*Wy
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13. 我没有男朋友。 l'R uzBQr
I have no boyfriend. （fault) b8h6fB:2
I don't have a boyfriend. (AT)w/
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14. 他的身体很健康。 97n,^t2F\
His body is healthy. （fault) -ze@~Z@
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 yJ2A!id
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) , ik\MSS
The price is too high/ rather low. s@K #M
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16. 我们下了车。 [(iJj3s!
We got off the car. jTN!\RH9NF
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17. 车速快了。 X({R +
The speed of the car is fast. /H$/s=YU\U
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ NBO&VYs|
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? eX CH*vZY
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） bd yIt)tK+
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） @\Yu?_a
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. XB+Juk&d
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 ^f hkWx 4i
I feel very painful in my right hand. .] BJM?9
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 9m}c2:p
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) = ~ ="#
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 .!Os'Y9[ ,
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) G;;iGN
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. e2Df@ 8>
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 O^4K o}
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) )5l9!1j
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. UP@-@syGw
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 g({dD ;
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. *!u
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24. 别理她。 qj<_*
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) |^t8ct?x ~
Leave her alone. T0lbMp
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 Z$ 6yB
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) H:`[ $
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26. 黄山正在读书。 nX-%qc"
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) B#K2?Et!t
Samuel is reading. < m+$@:cO
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 av}pT)]\
I am having many difficulties. （fault) oWdvpvO
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. r^!P=BS{
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 ZH=oQV)6
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) 28d=-s=[
Please hurry up or well be late. aDE)Nf}
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 `"< tk1Kq"
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) P:2 0i*QU
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