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The price is very suitable for me. （fault) \$*$= '6"
The price is right. &O\(;mFc
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ q~K(]Ya/
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4. 用英语怎么说？ X2 6
How to say? （fault) %bXtKhg5eJ
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I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) vC;]jJb:
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用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. $K~LM8_CKy
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6. 我没有英文名。 wmr-}Y!9u%
I haven't English name. （fault) %~ |HFYd
I don't have an English name. `'_m\uo
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 SU _SU".
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. ~q0*"\Ff
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7. 我想我不行。 }A$WO {2
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Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 vdoZ&Tu
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 C R<`ZNuWz
I don't dance well too. （fault) v{x{=M]
I am not a very good dancer either. -]G(ms;}/Y
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 HHk)ZfWRo
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9. 现在几点钟了？ ` :{B(+6
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What time is it, please? 2N c>6
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 uUR~&8ERX
My English is poor. （fault) ^
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I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. %%%fL;-y
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. uv{ P,]lK
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 Pj#'}ru!
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 {y
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我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. XV>JD/K2
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 jMBiaX`F
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ i@"e,7mSG
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) <pLT'Y=
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? a5'#j35
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 |Y i)"-
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12. 我没有经验。 pe0x""K
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13. 我没有男朋友。 &(rW w Oo6
I have no boyfriend. （fault) ri~<~oB 2:
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14. 他的身体很健康。 jLg@ FDb~
His body is healthy. （fault) T>>YNaUL
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 y9Y 1PH7G
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) ]bCq=6ZKR
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16. 我们下了车。 )bO BQbj
We got off the car. G*[P <<je_
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17. 车速快了。 Tq<2`*Qs
The speed of the car is fast. [}mA`5
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ `<\}FS`'
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是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） Ru!He,k7
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） Sywu=b
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. j{VGClb=T
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 s3s4OAY
I feel very painful in my right hand. hi =XYC,
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 fCAiLkT,C[
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) yWPIIWHx!
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 6bc3 37b
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) 1a0kfM$
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. RH0>ZZR
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 c2l_$p
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) i y YJR
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. mbl]>JsQD
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 ,n,RFa
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. I 1d0iU
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. 1xyU
24. 别理她。 W 3W 'oo
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) T4e\0.If
Leave her alone. JF9yVE -
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 pI+!92Z
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) !X >=l
I learned a lot in university. ~i B gw&Y
26. 黄山正在读书。 #1'\.v
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) a[bB T@f
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 $V>98M>j
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29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 :!& ;p
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) qMBR *f
Please hurry up or well be late. l|`9:H
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 z Z -wG
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) ]-o"}"3Ef
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