1. I very like it （Fault） ]36 R _Dp
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 ~M43#E[oOF
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) G|X1c}zAL
The price is right. %'t~+_
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 :9K 5zD
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ .F}ZP0THnZ
What's your job? （fault) 3Jk; +<
Are you working at the moment? U2+CL)al^
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 .$S`J2Y
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4. 用英语怎么说？ d<: VoQM6M
How to say? （fault) {v~& .|
How do you say this in English? 8a e]tX5$
Note：How to say是在中国最为泛滥成灾的中国式英语之一，这决不是地道的英语说法。同样的句子有：请问这个词如何拼写？How do you spell that please?请问这个单词怎么读？How do you pronounce this word? \+S~N:@><k
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 ?u 9)
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I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) t</Kel|D
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. 7c <2oTN'
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. 9k2HP]8=[{
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6. 我没有英文名。 o_os;
I haven't English name. （fault) &|Z:8]'P
I don't have an English name. T 4qbyui{
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 ugucq} ,[
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. 6}{2W<
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7. 我想我不行。 F]S exP4:A
I think I can't.（fault) E}\^GNT
I don't think I can. MT;<\T
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 Q_LPLmM
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 fm:/}7s
I don't dance well too. （fault) ':F{st>&H
I am not a very good dancer either. *1}9`$
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 "D8x HHb
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9. 现在几点钟了？ $7M64K{
What time is it now? （fault) (a]'}c$X9`
What time is it, please? [*8w v^
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 luLm:NWUM
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 pk(<],0]X
My English is poor. （fault) g :e|
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. 56&s'
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. N;RZIg(x
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 rb&^ ei9B
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 BI,K?D&W-
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. 7f[nNng
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 %+FM$xyJ
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ j08|zUe
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) |5$9l#e
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? #y}@F G
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 # C4
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I have no experience. （fault) xW n.vSos
I am I don't know much about that. $9Y2\'w<h6
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. ANn {*h
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13. 我没有男朋友。 ;Z
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I have no boyfriend. （fault) GAtK1%nPD
I don't have a boyfriend. aztP`S$h
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14. 他的身体很健康。 XC0G5r tB
His body is healthy. （fault) Af
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He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. bo\|mvB~
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 f x%'7/+
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) ^fXNeBj
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16. 我们下了车。 (Qq! u
We got off the car. oQWS$\Rr.
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17. 车速快了。 [WX+/pm7>
The speed of the car is fast. X1 #D}
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ 0%`\ 8
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? f9&D 0x?
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） 76$19
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以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. $ vlgiJ&f
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 SECL(@0(^
I feel very painful in my right hand. BAdHGwomh
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 6~;fj+S
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) a5L#c=
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 J
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I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) qC.jXU?rO
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. ;QREwT~H
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 zu^?9k
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) ?ti7iBz?
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. } 9<aX
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23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 |@Q (~[It
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. .;iXe
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. @*%Q,$
24. 别理她。 jr" yIC_
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) <s]K~ Vo
Leave her alone. ,^:Zf| V
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 #x)G2T'?
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) V{ra,a*
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26. 黄山正在读书。 R EQ2pfk0
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) Ml +.\'r
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27. exciting / excited。 [$8*(d"F'
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 XrFyN(p
I am having many difficulties. （fault) XuoI19V[
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. `lN1 u'(:
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 8Tt2T }
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Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) 8[(c'rl|)|
Please hurry up or well be late. UFouIS #L
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 pb_mW;JVu
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) @<W"$_ r-
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