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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 AYgXqmH~+
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) fCwE1r *^
The price is right. DU0/if9.
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 .] sJl
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ 8;V9%h`P>
What's your job? （fault) tq}45{FH3
Are you working at the moment? FY ms]bv
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 ZZ7qSyB s?
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4. 用英语怎么说？ i' 7+
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 T*f/M
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) >WIc" y.
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用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. G[A3H>
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6. 我没有英文名。 G$>QH-p
I haven't English name. （fault) XTo7fbW*
I don't have an English name. -cM1]soT
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 qD4]7"9
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. qyv=ot0"~F
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7. 我想我不行。 2S{P(B
I think I can't.（fault) tqZ+2c<W3
I don't think I can. NS~;{d \
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 DK\XC%~m
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 ,-4NSli
I don't dance well too. （fault) F5Z,Jm i^M
I am not a very good dancer either. H*'1bLzq
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 iCE!Tm DT
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9. 现在几点钟了？ k~ ^4
What time is it now? （fault) MQQm3VaKS
What time is it, please? ]x r0]
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 4"|Xndh1.
My English is poor. （fault) =/!lK&
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. y%SxQA +\
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. G{3 |d/;Bt
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 ~w+I2oS$
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 G
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我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. <qwf"Ey
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 N2v/<
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ IT1YF.i
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) }/F$ 73Xd
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? AJ bCC
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 c3^!S0U
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12. 我没有经验。 ,U z8 _r
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I am I don't know much about that. ?T/]w-q>
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13. 我没有男朋友。 #;]#NqFX
I have no boyfriend. （fault) STp9Gh-
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14. 他的身体很健康。 JaCX }[R
His body is healthy. （fault) m&:&z7^ p
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 *M1GVhW(+
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) :V(LBH0
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16. 我们下了车。 \8 `7E1d
We got off the car. QB*,+ u4
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The speed of the car is fast. wq$$.
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ _MBhwNBxZ
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? hOY@vm&
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当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） xB
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以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. #i bwD:{
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 g2vm ] j
I feel very painful in my right hand. 2n:<F9^"
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 Mg;pN K\n
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) i]v3CY|3AI
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 [';o -c"!
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) ,/\`Rc^n
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. oY)eN?c
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 h>/teHy /
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) ?zW'Hi
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. A2|Bbqd
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 KD kGQh#9
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. V<QpC5
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. ~}.C*;J
24. 别理她。 )|~&(+Q?]
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) }r: "X<`
Leave her alone. |_;kQ(,
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I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) e~]P _53
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26. 黄山正在读书。 p&(0e, `z/
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) -9b=-K.y
Samuel is reading. 1bFZyD"
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 cNWmaCLN$
I am having many difficulties. （fault) WLUgiW(0$
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. s41%A2Enh
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 M hMiSsZ
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) o? baiO kH
Please hurry up or well be late. . >"xp6
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 '12m4quO
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) qs]W2{-4~
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