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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 .xmB8 R
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) N '&>bO?@`
The price is right. w@Q~a x/
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ r*$f^T!|
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4. 用英语怎么说？ 6|f8DX%3V
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 Z]TQ+9t
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) Y%eW6Y#
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用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. v@yqTZ
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6. 我没有英文名。 a*D<J}xe
I haven't English name. （fault) U;
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I don't have an English name. uuF~+=.|
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 o&@ y^<UQ
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. <bg6k . s
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7. 我想我不行。 &K9 RV 4M5
I think I can't.（fault) @}!?}QU
I don't think I can. {v=[~H>bt
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 uaKb qX
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 Z`GEF|eh
I don't dance well too. （fault) SIR2 Kc0
I am not a very good dancer either. -UzWLVB^
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 Nb_ Glf
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9. 现在几点钟了？ <b _K*]Z
What time is it now? （fault) sg}<()
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 _:tS-Mx@5
My English is poor. （fault) |4j6}g\
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. Z+);}>-5
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. md18q:AG)
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 +N+117m
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 mr#.uhd.z
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. Sw-2vnSdM
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 Z> Rshtg
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ q8/k $5E
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) S\t!7Xs%*U
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? ebCS4&c
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 "oZ_1qi<
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12. 我没有经验。 Nr,I`x\N
I have no experience. （fault) (]I= ';\
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13. 我没有男朋友。 ~.U \Y
I have no boyfriend. （fault) hH;i_("i(h
I don't have a boyfriend. f]?&R c2C
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14. 他的身体很健康。 w^nA/=;r
His body is healthy. （fault) `VGw5o
He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. Th\T$T`X$
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 g;AW
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) d*k5h<jM
The price is too high/ rather low. Rb:?%\=
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16. 我们下了车。 c>/7E-T
We got off the car. '3Fb[md54
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17. 车速快了。 Zj ^e8u=T
The speed of the car is fast. \j wxW6>
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ KY%qzq,n
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? 9X33{
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） Tl-%;X<X
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） ?g@X+!RB
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. =<aFkBX -
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 !e
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I feel very painful in my right hand. |<o qT+?i
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 c0&! S-4M
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) a wQGu,<N
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 j8^ #698X
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) t *Z5 {
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. FBouXu #
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 !lsa5w{
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) c`lL&*]
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. /FPO'} 6i
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 Wk/Q~ o
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. sVmqx ^-
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. *u,&?fCl
24. 别理她。 I7Abf7>*Q
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) v6L]3O1
Leave her alone. 3tUn?; 9B
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 ]{+Y!tD
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) ).e}.Z6[i`
I learned a lot in university. <W7WlT
26. 黄山正在读书。 unz~vG1T n
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) r6aIW8
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27. exciting / excited。 D88IU9V&n
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 Tl]yl$
I am having many difficulties. （fault) P&t w!B
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. TMs Cl6dB
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 tBl (E
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) |_+l D|'
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30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 -* J !Ws(9
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) fF9hL3h?)
Jealousy drove her to despair. %i?v)EW
