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I like it very much. (true) t9GR69v:?
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 n:I,PS0H<
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) Q",t3i4
The price is right. ^KnU4sD
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 .O 5Z8 p
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ RtkEGxw*^
What's your job? （fault) /Y:sLGQLD
Are you working at the moment? zJKv'>?
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 P [G)sA_"
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4. 用英语怎么说？ Hp|kQJ[L E
How to say? （fault) b"<liGh"n-
How do you say this in English? #X+JHl
Note：How to say是在中国最为泛滥成灾的中国式英语之一，这决不是地道的英语说法。同样的句子有：请问这个词如何拼写？How do you spell that please?请问这个单词怎么读？How do you pronounce this word? T8?Ghbn
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 ;R Z )
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) Di ,^%
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. P8 OaoPj
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. :_`F{rDB
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6. 我没有英文名。 y ;m |
I haven't English name. （fault)
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I don't have an English name. UP$.+<vm
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 w8")w*9Lmg
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. 9d0@wq.
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7. 我想我不行。 ;Zcswt8]u
I think I can't.（fault) ih-#5M@
I don't think I can. gMi0FO '
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 ]\-A;}\e
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 >4x( e\B
I don't dance well too. （fault) { T/[cu<
I am not a very good dancer either. T=
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9. 现在几点钟了？ |"q5sym8Y_
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What time is it, please? rm'SO JVA
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 `$Y.Y5mGtJ
My English is poor. （fault) &~ cBNw|
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. ^) /0yB
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. g i3F`
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当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 /cUO$m o
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 % "i(K@
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. d(ZO6Nr Q
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 &N$<e(K
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ h},IF
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) udK% >
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? X;+sUj8
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 1;bh^WMJ
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12. 我没有经验。 pHGY Q;:L
I have no experience. （fault) B B{$&Oh
I am I don't know much about that. N@4w!
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13. 我没有男朋友。 $j%'{) gK
I have no boyfriend. （fault) L]|gZ&^
I don't have a boyfriend. ,C\i^>=
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14. 他的身体很健康。 DaQ?\uq
His body is healthy. （fault) u= *FI
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 )N{Pw$l_
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) G{~J|{t\yz
The price is too high/ rather low. (Bb5? fw
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16. 我们下了车。 ' `[&}R
We got off the car. oi7@s 0@
We got out of the car. E:_ZA
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17. 车速快了。 3)wN))VBX
The speed of the car is fast. b<[Or^X
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ )b L'[h
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? 0@0w+&*"@
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） dmtr*pM_
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） =osk+uzzG
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. tPWLg),
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 /|m2WxK)
I feel very painful in my right hand. :1Xz4wkWS*
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 wYXQlxd y
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) :wyno#8`-
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 i$"F{|Z0
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) U BU=9a5
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. tyDU
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22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 h|9L5
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) R Z?jJm$
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. nIf1sH>
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 8P\G }
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. Pl06:g2I
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. se2!N:|R!G
24. 别理她。 bjW]bRw
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) pZ{+c
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25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 <]t%8GB2V
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) :as$4|
I learned a lot in university. yx8z4*]kH
26. 黄山正在读书。 wo{gG? B
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) `:fZ)$sY
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27. exciting / excited。 Igt#V;kK"2
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 :K,i\
I am having many difficulties. （fault) T@B/xAq5!
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. U [-o> W#
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 9MJG;+B~
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) oG?Xk%7&\
Please hurry up or well be late. 3BUSv#w{i
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 9wUkh}s
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) <?.&^|kS
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