1. I very like it （Fault） F4M<5Yi
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 qi;@A-cq
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) Pan^@B=Q
The price is right. he8y
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 Ms=x~o'
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ ]$Ky ZHj{
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Are you working at the moment? A ?ma5h
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 =&U JFu
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4. 用英语怎么说？ $fPf/yQmC
How to say? （fault) ,6~c0]/
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 If F<8~~E
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) \vT0\1:|i
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用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. m@;X%wf<U
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6. 我没有英文名。 _FeLSk.
I haven't English name. （fault) Yn+/yz5k_
I don't have an English name. u sZmf=p-r
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 Y\(Q
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. ib /B!?/
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7. 我想我不行。 :iD( [V
I think I can't.（fault) sycN
I don't think I can. z'O$[6m6
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 KXL]Qw FN
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 cR[)[9}
I don't dance well too. （fault) j/TsHJ=
I am not a very good dancer either. .M!6${N);
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 FTI[YR8?Y
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9. 现在几点钟了？ bU/5ug.
What time is it now? （fault) +_|M*%
What time is it, please? bmr.EB/
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 HDvj{
My English is poor. （fault) H^_[nL
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. H[U$4
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Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. !lG5BOJM
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 G#ZU^%$M,
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 uhSRl~tn
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. j2} C
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 5? kJ]:
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ j +\I4oFN
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) vg &Dr
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Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 (/1 4)" Sk
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12. 我没有经验。 {'l^{"GO"
I have no experience. （fault) U 3aY =8B
I am I don't know much about that. |Kky+*
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. UBs'3M
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13. 我没有男朋友。 DDq*#;dP
I have no boyfriend. （fault) ?k<i e2
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 ):;
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The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) >KH.~Jfy
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16. 我们下了车。 cod_ _.
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17. 车速快了。 Ki (qA(r
The speed of the car is fast. @(Wx(3JR?}
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ P95U {
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? N%v}$58Z
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） mjO4 GpG3
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） .xS3,O_[
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. 0 %+S@_|
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 *&9_+F8ly
I feel very painful in my right hand. Gu}|CFL\
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 Y*/:IYr`
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) 3? iRf6;n
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 D^yZ!}Kl
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) c"Kl@ [1\~
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. /{vv n
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 _W'>?e0i
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) s%z\szd*
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. A&*l b7X
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 ()e .J
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. ,X25 -OFZ
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. ,V'+16xW
24. 别理她。 28 [hp[<
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) VHwb 7f]gq
Leave her alone. 3/>T/To&2
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 EtvZk9d6h*
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) vM!lL6T:
I learned a lot in university. o% XAw
26. 黄山正在读书。 kW0|\
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) [* ,k
Samuel is reading. ,*$L_itL
27. exciting / excited。 `WQz_}TqB
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 7nM]E_
I am having many difficulties. （fault) :@x 24wN/
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. N7Vv "o
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 =cI -<0QSn
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) 0h/gqlTK1
Please hurry up or well be late. T;K@3]FbX
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 OF J49X
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) A:PQIcR;V
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