1. I very like it （Fault） K-C,n~-
I like it very much. (true) \OV tvJV]
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 `9K5 ;]
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) h9ScN(|0y
The price is right. ":Tm6Nj
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 Yw3'9m^
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ c]ARgrH-
What's your job? （fault) F =e9o*z
Are you working at the moment? hOAZvr fQ4
Note：what's your job ALTOi?
这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 +_i{4Iz~p
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4. 用英语怎么说？ @h{|tP%"
How to say? （fault) W[O]Aal{
How do you say this in English? G m Wr
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 &su'znLV
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) TSP%5v;Dh
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. 0Xh_.PF
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. Xh;.T=/E|
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6. 我没有英文名。 \s5Uvws
I haven't English name. （fault) |g 3:+&
I don't have an English name. b/z-W`gw
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 ja_8n["z
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. ]WDmx$"&e
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7. 我想我不行。 f*X CWr
I think I can't.（fault) ZiJF.(JS
I don't think I can. C!5A,| DX
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 ~U&NY7.@
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 C.92FiC
I don't dance well too. （fault) !lgL=Ys(
I am not a very good dancer either. #,d~t
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 %MjoY_<:_
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9. 现在几点钟了？ INi $-Y+
What time is it now? （fault) lln"c
What time is it, please? z5fE<=<X_W
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 njy2pDC@
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 C:J;'[,S
My English is poor. （fault) fkzSX8a9}
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. 2H|:/y
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. /e '3\,2_
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 LW]fme<V?
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 =*,SD
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. K?^;| m-
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 'K,\
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ Q*smH-Sw
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) m;OvOc,
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? j~ qm$ 'H
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 nHm}^.B*+
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12. 我没有经验。 &n k)F<
I have no experience. （fault) Lj1l ]OD
I am I don't know much about that. ;?2)[a
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. ~wb1sn3
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13. 我没有男朋友。 !,Uo{@E)Y
I have no boyfriend. （fault) M5`v^>
I don't have a boyfriend. *DF3juf~
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14. 他的身体很健康。 qk (Eyp
His body is healthy. （fault) \ 3 SY2g8+
He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. Nn. 9J
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 ~`OX}h/Z
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault)
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The price is too high/ rather low. e% \^V\L
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16. 我们下了车。 Js,! G
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17. 车速快了。 *'/,
The speed of the car is fast. P>7Xbm,VP
The car is speeding. Or 揟he car is going too fast.? x>#{C,Fi
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ jdxHWkQ
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? TrjyU
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） =A"Abmx|
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） \H] |5fp*
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. DB' 0
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 Vm[R p, "
I feel very painful in my right hand. .a*?Pal@@
My right hand is very painful. Or ? My right hand hurts(aches).? U: 9&0`k(
20. 他看到她很惊讶。 pi"H?EHk
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) ,-pE/3|(
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 |#TU"$;
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) @?,x3\N-
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. 8 1,N92T5
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 -H-U8/W C
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) sl' 4AK~\
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. hg)Xr5>
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 9z7_D_yN2
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. >ED;_L*_o
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. sf>
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24. 别理她。 >G]JwO
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) Ebnb-Lze,
Leave her alone. 7H6Ts8^S
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 0j$\k|xFXZ
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) gX}'b\zxC
I learned a lot in university. ;2f=d_/x
26. 黄山正在读书。 n1-p/a.
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) 2f,8Jnia
Samuel is reading. ='7m$,{(Q[
27. exciting / excited。 -$d?e%}#
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 h,{m{Xh
I am having many difficulties. （fault) RHF"$6EAFG
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. uJ% <+ I
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 7>Sc f
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) W{6QvQD8
Please hurry up or well be late. z74J yY
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 {?qfH>oFA
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) }a]`"_i;[
Jealousy drove her to despair.
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