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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 GPGP te C
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) ^/}4M'[ w
The price is right. UkD\ma
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ P 0+@,kM
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Are you working at the moment? l =T; hk
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 @8`I !fZ
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4. 用英语怎么说？ \kUQe-:he
How to say? （fault) gQSVPb zK
How do you say this in English? ;*zLf 9i
Note：How to say是在中国最为泛滥成灾的中国式英语之一，这决不是地道的英语说法。同样的句子有：请问这个词如何拼写？How do you spell that please?请问这个单词怎么读？How do you pronounce this word? (O(TFE 5^
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 'l!\2Wv2
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) C4PT(cezR
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用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. Ebj0 {ZL
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6. 我没有英文名。 '3^ qW
I haven't English name. （fault) E<! L^A
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I don't have an English name. <G<5)$
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Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 `_GC S,/t
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. t@#5
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7. 我想我不行。 "]p&7
I think I can't.（fault) ` W );+s
I don't think I can. 19(x$=:
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 gn/]1NNfR
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 <4;,
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I don't dance well too. （fault) '^WR5P< 8c
I am not a very good dancer either. (t5y$b c
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 }yrs6pQ
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9. 现在几点钟了？ 8r[TM
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What time is it, please? !<j4*av:G
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 WW3Jxd
My English is poor. （fault) Z>3 ~n
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. y_W?7 S
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. ? (B}w*G~
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 or;VmU8$zb
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 By!u*vSev
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. "8z Me L
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 BH^*K/ ^
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ NW0se
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Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) =z9,=rR4
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12. 我没有经验。 & u[F)|
I have no experience. （fault)
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I am I don't know much about that. V#b*:E.cA
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area.
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13. 我没有男朋友。 r/NaoIrJV
I have no boyfriend. （fault) W6EEC<$JL
I don't have a boyfriend. <)O#Y76s
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14. 他的身体很健康。 r :0RvWif
His body is healthy. （fault) BSSeh e*
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The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) dE[X6$H[
The price is too high/ rather low. 5)k/ 4l '
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16. 我们下了车。 "k [$euV
We got off the car. p'@z}T?F
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The speed of the car is fast. Z
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ X&49C:jN
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? 1#>uqUxah
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） 8BS Nm
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） w[ QC
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. 7I(QTc)*
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 j9Z1=z
I feel very painful in my right hand. UNrO$aX!1'
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 Vn/FW?d7
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) 4uE /!dT
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 4 l+z
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) V%M@zd?u.
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. Iz#jR2:yn
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 JGzEm>_ m
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) T`I4_x
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. brCL"g|}
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 nM8'="$
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. 6(A"5B=\
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24. 别理她。 YO@~y *,
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) K"Irg.
Leave her alone. G-o6~"J\
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 G&6`?1k
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) /W}"/W9
I learned a lot in university. K7q R
26. 黄山正在读书。 6k37RpgH
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) Y |-&=
Samuel is reading. 8k Sb9 2
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 w);Bet
I am having many difficulties. （fault) [ NGq$5
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29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 7.yCs[Z
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) Q? Xqf7y
Please hurry up or well be late. a63Ud<_a7
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 3Z}m5f`t
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) = |
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