1. I very like it （Fault） J<D =\
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 8cl!8gfv
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) }z6H xB]$
The price is right. +{&g|V
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ z> SCv;Q
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Note：what's your job ~ i ,my31
这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 &x}JC/u]fd
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4. 用英语怎么说？ 08Gr
How to say? （fault) '=5N ?)
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 0nX5
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I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) %"tf`,d~3
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. :Li)]qN.I
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. 2]l*{l^ Bl
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6. 我没有英文名。 r i z({
I haven't English name. （fault) IdM ;N
I don't have an English name. \% (R~ H
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 S<44{
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明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. x< " e
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7. 我想我不行。 G.; <?W
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I don't think I can. - >2ej4C
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 se-}d.PwL
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 x:(e: I8x(
I don't dance well too. （fault) gDH x+"?
I am not a very good dancer either. K 4KmoGb
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 9%8T09I!
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9. 现在几点钟了？ CwAl -o
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What time is it, please? !eW<4jYB
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 K% ;O$
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 Adh CC13B
My English is poor. （fault) IkupW|}rc
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. V6c?aZ,O
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. #RcmO **
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 q?6Zu :':
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 /dO& r'!:
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. ~0`Pe{^*
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 Z`[j;= [
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ S5;q)qz2J
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) db`<E
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Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? t]V)3Ww
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12. 我没有经验。 Sng V<J>zR
I have no experience. （fault) 0\ /7[nwS
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13. 我没有男朋友。 ]uP {Sj
I have no boyfriend. （fault) i^=an?}/
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14. 他的身体很健康。 #ws6z`mt
His body is healthy. （fault) REa%kU
He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. 79&Mc,69
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 KxvT} "k
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) +_+_`q>]
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16. 我们下了车。 Cnc77EUD
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17. 车速快了。 "?]5"lNC|
The speed of the car is fast. E3`KO'v%
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ S_^ "$j
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? c$p1Sovw
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） 9"/{gf3 D
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） p@P [pzxI
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. c45Mv_
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 Odagac a
I feel very painful in my right hand. G G7N! e Z
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 f}*Xz.[bCp
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) i ud%X51
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 %e _WO,R
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) U9Y'eP.2
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. u+{5c5_
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 ]SK (cfA`
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) DK:d'zb
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. p/@z4TCNX
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 YTY0N5["
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. IUzRE?Kzf
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. L&l> ? "_
24. 别理她。 `OduBUI] ]
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) Y5K!DMK Y
Leave her alone. #* w$JH
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 X]`\NNx
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) S!rUdxO
I learned a lot in university. 7/Ew(X8Fs
26. 黄山正在读书。 =\`9 \Gd
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) tr ):n @
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 vG<Mz?wr
I am having many difficulties. （fault) Dt8eVWkN ~
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. Y8Mo . v
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 N#|c2n+
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) /bg8oB4
Please hurry up or well be late. ZWYwVAo
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 d`^j\b>5(
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) wp$SO^?-
Jealousy drove her to despair. LM0 TSB?
