1. I very like it （Fault） !HSX:qAP$
I like it very much. (true) qLk7C0
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 wd<jh,Y
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) I gb%bO_
The price is right. Bs';!,=
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 6UAw9
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ sV-UY!
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Are you working at the moment? t W=oAy
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 Tk:%YS;=
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4. 用英语怎么说？ (/gMtIw
How to say? （fault) VNHt ]Ewj
How do you say this in English? [WBU _
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 g#r,u5<*?
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) +9]CGYj
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. &D#B"XI
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. o{xA{ @<
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6. 我没有英文名。 f\c%G=y
I haven't English name. （fault) zD):
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I don't have an English name. \5R>+[ n!
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 ^/"2s}+
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. 3TF'[(K=
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7. 我想我不行。 L ]QBh\
I think I can't.（fault) ],w+4;+
I don't think I can. S@6 :H"
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 _0!<iN L
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 'jj J[16"d
I don't dance well too. （fault) "-A@d&5.
I am not a very good dancer either. _[8sL^
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 t2#zQ[~X!
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9. 现在几点钟了？ ErY-`8U"
What time is it now? （fault) W;ADc2#)
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 A]AM |2 D
My English is poor. （fault) #u$ Z/,
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. x qLIs:*
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. ;ksxz
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 8I%N^G
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 Xr$hQbl5D
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. d{~Qd|<rr
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 g %2twq _
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ XY HVw)
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) *&vi3#ur
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? nQM7@"R
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 6u ubkt
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12. 我没有经验。 b@yFqgJ_
I have no experience. （fault) 4!0n M|~
I am I don't know much about that. q .69< Rs
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. ? &se]\
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13. 我没有男朋友。 Eumdv#Qg
I have no boyfriend. （fault) 5H
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I don't have a boyfriend. 9Li.B1j
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14. 他的身体很健康。 WDQw)EUl&
His body is healthy. （fault) iBPx97a
He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. Y~uqKb;A
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 S[L2vM)
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) OCYC
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The price is too high/ rather low. B)L;ja
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16. 我们下了车。 Oky9G C.a
We got off the car. 0fU^
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17. 车速快了。 "Go)t + -
The speed of the car is fast. lp%i%*EQ*
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ =OU] <%
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? XqK\'8]\Mw
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） t4CI +fq y
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） PbN"+ q M
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. 3+| {O
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 {_5P N^J
I feel very painful in my right hand. DC8,ns]!y
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 Dt8wd,B
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) C*fSP dg?
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 |?
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I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) n*U+jc
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. _I}rQfPJ
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 x tP=/B /
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) Hxzdxwz%$
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. hg=BXe4:
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 1 O]27"9
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. uS i/|
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. Je~d/,^WU
24. 别理她。 ~ E |L4E
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) yNu%D$6u7
Leave her alone. J>Uzd,
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25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 *^5. .0du
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) %Jc>joU
I learned a lot in university. x#s=eeP1
26. 黄山正在读书。 VIjsz4 2 C
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) 58 Rmq/6s
Samuel is reading. W9ewj:4\0
27. exciting / excited。 sCF7K=a
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 xr \wOQ*`
I am having many difficulties. （fault) @YfCS8
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I am having a few problems / lots of problems. 4$ <-3IP,
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 ^>f jURR
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) 7,N>u8cTh
Please hurry up or well be late. #Zy-X_r
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 DG
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She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) d^<a)>5h
Jealousy drove her to despair. ,Cckp! 6
