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I like it very much. (true) ]nmVT~lBe"
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 Yu1[`QbB
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) M `m-@z
The price is right. D=ZH? d
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 "}/$ xOl"
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ :`U@b
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Are you working at the moment? YC,s]~[[
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 .r=F'i}-j*
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4. 用英语怎么说？ }\
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 Xo, }S\wcn
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) k+nfW]UNF
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. ~6bf-Wg'X
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. ! J7ExfEA
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6. 我没有英文名。 .A6i?iROe
I haven't English name. （fault) IZw> !KYG
I don't have an English name. VDnN2)Km*
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 ,\".|m1o.
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. 98 Dg[O
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7. 我想我不行。 ^/`W0kT
I think I can't.（fault) VgBZ@*z(x
I don't think I can. 4xYW?s(
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 {`KRr:w
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 d<,'9/a>
I don't dance well too. （fault) DERhmJ;>H
I am not a very good dancer either. V:Z}cfR .7
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 eG &3E`[
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9. 现在几点钟了？ VyF|d? b
What time is it now? （fault) Ja`xG{~Y7i
What time is it, please? #gQaNc?
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 sfo+ B$4|
My English is poor. （fault) WciL
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I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. )fGIe rS
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. 39!$x [
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 ; 5cN
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另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 ZUg ~8VVe
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. |L }1@0i
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 )0\"8}!
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ . 5 s#JL
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) gS
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Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? _Qh :*j!
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12. 我没有经验。 PKxI0 9B
I have no experience. （fault) YU]|N 'mL2
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13. 我没有男朋友。 vAV{HBQ*
I have no boyfriend. （fault) Kn#CIFbBN
I don't have a boyfriend. C2a2K={
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14. 他的身体很健康。 To!`
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His body is healthy. （fault) |qAU\m"Pc
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 1*VArr6*6
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) 2d60o~ E
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16. 我们下了车。 n)bbEXO
We got off the car. pPD }>q
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17. 车速快了。 Tu[I84
The speed of the car is fast. C"
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ {^ jRV@
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? W{l{O1,
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当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） Cx[Cst `
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. H '_ v
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 %s;=H)8
I feel very painful in my right hand. wV{jJyRl
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 :G8:b.
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) t3VZjO
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 Obz Fh?W
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) hf1h*x^J
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. esk~\ !d
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 ^ U.t5jj
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) PHh4ZFl]_I
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. bQ `|G(g-d
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 o+% ($p
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. tVr^1 Y
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood.
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24. 别理她。 b.#0{*/ G
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) "">{8
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25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 /V" 6 Q'D
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) $a.,; :
I learned a lot in university. &^hLFd7j/
26. 黄山正在读书。 !M(3[(Ni
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) {+CBThC
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27. exciting / excited。 Gl]z@ZXWIw
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 .*~t2 :
I am having many difficulties. （fault) a i$s
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. pm>$'z!.):
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 3[cGSI"+
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) u+Sj#iZ
Please hurry up or well be late. 4SNDKFw
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 3 :mZ1+
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) /DGEI&}&:u
Jealousy drove her to despair. T/nG\WZbZn
