1. I very like it （Fault） KzQu LD(e
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 ?-JW2 E"uT
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) Q 7-'5s
The price is right. OmlM9cXm^4
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 BvP++,a&Sa
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ YRQ?: a{H
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4. 用英语怎么说？ JqV}$E"M2
How to say? （fault) C5 Mpm)-%
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 .EZ8yJj1Q
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) .>1vN+
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用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. gfiFRwC`v
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6. 我没有英文名。 Hi^ Z`97c
I haven't English name. （fault) rJ(A O' =
I don't have an English name. Vi#[k n'
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 wb ^>/
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. 6Ev+!!znu
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7. 我想我不行。 WO$8j2!~#
I think I can't.（fault) F`>qg2wO
I don't think I can. x"A\ Z-xxz
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 =
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 I#;.; %u
I don't dance well too. （fault) 3gYtu-1
I am not a very good dancer either. <?h (Dchq
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 ~:*V'/2k
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9. 现在几点钟了？ M zF,is
What time is it now? （fault) F~/~_9RJ
What time is it, please? rpc;*t+z
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 BwAmNW&i
My English is poor. （fault) P MI?PC[;
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. P!gY&>EU
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. |@VhR(^O$
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 $."F z
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另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 #<G:&
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. ,{_56j^d,
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ ( dh9aR_a
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) # )s
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12. 我没有经验。 ZCA= n
I have no experience. （fault) @2` nBtk
I am I don't know much about that. n g9 _c
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. Wu/:ES)C
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13. 我没有男朋友。 c *i,z
I have no boyfriend. （fault) \eAV: qV
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14. 他的身体很健康。 Kd\d>&b
His body is healthy. （fault) X9?0`6Li
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 0IZF%`
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) %3.
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16. 我们下了车。 A@-U#Uv N
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17. 车速快了。 j%}9tM6[
The speed of the car is fast. M"-.D;sa1
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ 3QF[@8EH{
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? &8I*N6p:%/
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） _C19eW'
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以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. q
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 Tl#2w=
I feel very painful in my right hand. 6PC ?*^v
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 S,Q(,e ^&
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) `fl$ o6S/
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 X$?0C{@.}
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) 9W-1P} e,
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. 8"p rWAN
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 |:,`dQfw
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) 1H -~+lf
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. N#@v`S
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 '8FHn~F
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. .v-2A );I
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. ?y__ Vrw
24. 别理她。 tI5*0
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) Mb45UG#2
Leave her alone. ZE1${QFkG
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 B>sQcZ:
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) hjhZ": I.
I learned a lot in university. t_ Rj1U
26. 黄山正在读书。 ?{xD {f$
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) cob??|,\m
Samuel is reading. Vv+ oq5hf
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 @Kw&XK e`
I am having many difficulties. （fault) {,? Gj@$
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. (y1S*_D
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 KHGUR(\Rd6
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) )*Wz5x
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30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 -BWWaL
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) cl |}0 Q5
Jealousy drove her to despair. IRTWmT
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