1. I very like it （Fault） Yx&d\/ 9
I like it very much. (true) b7y#uL1 AE
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 /9,y+"0SQz
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) g nYo/q=K
The price is right. MEu{'[C
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 %)Z,?DzZ
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4. 用英语怎么说？ 5j v*C]z
How to say? （fault) %f?Zg44
How do you say this in English? ??P %.
Note：How to say是在中国最为泛滥成灾的中国式英语之一，这决不是地道的英语说法。同样的句子有：请问这个词如何拼写？How do you spell that please?请问这个单词怎么读？How do you pronounce this word? a)L|kux;l
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 VUO e7c=
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) R?y_tho4A
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用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. ,4=mlte"
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6. 我没有英文名。 4,f`C0>"
I haven't English name. （fault) 2.^C IJ c
I don't have an English name. CfVL'
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 &?TXsxf1Zh
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. do9~#F
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7. 我想我不行。 m.<or?l'y>
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I don't think I can. %<r}V<OeR
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 <m0=bm{j
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 a|(|! =
I don't dance well too. （fault) 5A^8?,F@
I am not a very good dancer either. $ i nKI
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 j\NCoos
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9. 现在几点钟了？ qO/3:-
What time is it now? （fault) #*%? ]B=
What time is it, please? Igw2n{})w
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 mw Mu1#
My English is poor. （fault) 4`Zo Ar-5|
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. WJI}~/z;C
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. .Yvy37n((
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 lANi$
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另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 2jlz #Sk
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. ;$8ptB .
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ b~B'FD
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) (zxL!Z R<
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12. 我没有经验。 ';}:*nZ//_
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I am I don't know much about that. j&U7xv
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13. 我没有男朋友。 TU;AO%5
I have no boyfriend. （fault) qu!x#OY+
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14. 他的身体很健康。 4E_u.tJ
His body is healthy. （fault) }gFa9M<
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 { U@"]{3Qx
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) ,\i,2<hz.
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16. 我们下了车。 }_-tJ.
We got off the car. !VXy67
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17. 车速快了。 :fnJp9c
The speed of the car is fast. % Pl |3 i
The car is speeding. Or 揟he car is going too fast.? AZ4:3}
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ >;F} >_i
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? /reGT! u
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） x>,wmk5)
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） ( kyRx+gA
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. 9 G"4w` P
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 u\/TR#b
I feel very painful in my right hand. 1 <m.Q*
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 3sIdwY)ZS_
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) '4D7:
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 |'u BkL0q
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) ueg%D +u
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. #T 8jHnI
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 7h2/8YUgQ
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) m:Rm(ga9
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking.
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23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 G T80k]e.
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. B.smQt
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. MRZN4<} 9
24. 别理她。 ZsCwNZR
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) Nf2lw]-G4
Leave her alone. 7xY&7 x(v
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 dd;rne v+
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) t;0]d7ey'
I learned a lot in university. N}) vrB;1
26. 黄山正在读书。 I 9?X
Samuel is reading a book. （fault)
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Samuel is reading. !KT.p2\
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 T+t7/PwC;
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I am having a few problems / lots of problems. A |@ d {g
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 k]P 'D
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Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) #c"05/=A
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30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 (CtRU
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) *a0#PfS[
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