1. I very like it （Fault） UiF ? Nx~
I like it very much. (true) R\1#)3e0
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 vM|?;QM
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) n%W~+
The price is right. EKq9m=Ua@o
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 VO[s:e9L
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ qdNYY&6>?u
What's your job? （fault) 'Pr(7^
Are you working at the moment? _T8#36iR
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 'mG[#M/Y
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4. 用英语怎么说？ [ gx<7 }[
How to say? （fault) >*{\N^:z
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 ZrXvR`bsw
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) Ah) _mxK
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. .B_) w:oF
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. 3($%A GKJ
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6. 我没有英文名。 IHMZ E42
I haven't English name. （fault) Z/6B[,V
I don't have an English name. )r5QOa/
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 ]X;Ty\UD&
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. _U%!&_m6
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7. 我想我不行。 mEr* n
I think I can't.（fault) ub0]nov
I don't think I can. buG0#:
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 "JKrbgN@;L
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 M($dh9 A_
I don't dance well too. （fault) v8Bi 1,g
I am not a very good dancer either. D8C@ x`
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。
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9. 现在几点钟了？ UYD( ++
What time is it now? （fault) )9{?C4NQ
What time is it, please? K/
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 r,!7TuBl
My English is poor. （fault) c+ Ejah+
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. -Q<3Q_
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. ]?/[& PP,
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 8L9xP'[ ^
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 HBV~`0O$
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. a
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ o[!]xmj
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) +_3> T''_
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? _t 'Kj \
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 #Kn=Q
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12. 我没有经验。 >-c ;
I have no experience. （fault) v|<Dc8i+
I am I don't know much about that. \[% [`m
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13. 我没有男朋友。 @;"HslU\Q
I have no boyfriend. （fault) O}*[@uv/
I don't have a boyfriend. ^mm:u<Yt
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14. 他的身体很健康。 +8 ]}'6m
His body is healthy. （fault) -A[i TI"
He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. #x" 4tI
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 0jro0f'
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) {ckA
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16. 我们下了车。 Xv|~1v%s7
We got off the car. X0 *
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We got out of the car. I)U|~N
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17. 车速快了。 "|gNNmr
The speed of the car is fast. bT@ 3fuL4
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ #E3Y;
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Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? (B.J8`h }
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） vA10'Gx '
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） S6*3."Sk
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. W 1w)SS
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 f5IO<(:E^
I feel very painful in my right hand. 5#!pwjt~7
My right hand is very painful. Or ? My right hand hurts(aches).? !E'jd72O
20. 他看到她很惊讶。 >}\!'3)_
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) 5Y"JR WC
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 3gQQ,V..
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) _8)9I?jH
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. P#Z$+&)b)s
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 lBvQ?CJ<y
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) WFocA:
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. <VS\z(K
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 U{"&Jj
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. Wo<zvut8
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. vZ\~+qV,A
24. 别理她。 EGf9pcUEO&
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) rQC{"hS1
Leave her alone. -5l74f!i
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 *6cP-Vzd
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) CP) x;
I learned a lot in university. cxFfAk\,en
26. 黄山正在读书。 {a- p/\U
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) S^HuQe!#
Samuel is reading. *` >(K&
27. exciting / excited。 U< |kA(5
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 r5xu#%hgp;
I am having many difficulties. （fault) L5 Rj;qhi
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. j)?I]j/
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 iqig~fjK ~
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) SWvy< f4<
Please hurry up or well be late. Cp7 EJr~
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 k%?wNk>
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) }Y~o =3-
Jealousy drove her to despair. ]i3 2-8%
