1. I very like it （Fault） bIvJs9L
I like it very much. (true) BLl%D
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 BK`Q)[
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) 0~PXa(!^K
The price is right. I ?^Q084
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ J};u25:}
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 wHB Hkz
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4. 用英语怎么说？ uMiD*6,$<
How to say? （fault) $ uz1
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 <Y}"D Yt
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) Ti9:'I
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用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. Allt]P>
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6. 我没有英文名。 EyKkjEXx_
I haven't English name. （fault) *<|~ =*Ddf
I don't have an English name. ^cKv JSY
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 pAU fG^v
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. +[X.-,yW
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7. 我想我不行。 Y1yv I
I think I can't.（fault) $~w@ 0Yl
I don't think I can. .dg 4gr \D
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 xy-$v
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 G>_ 42Rp
I don't dance well too. （fault) (d5vH)+ A
I am not a very good dancer either. pR@GvweA
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 -6em*$k^
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9. 现在几点钟了？ n !CP_
What time is it now? （fault) : e0R7sj
What time is it, please? ] sm0E@ 1
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 ]$?zT`>(F
My English is poor. （fault) m"?' hR2
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. ||*&g2Y
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. A^= Hu,"e
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 L_.xr
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另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 Vx\# +)4
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. C,VqT6E<
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 "I}'C^gP
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ )=,9`+Zta
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) u
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12. 我没有经验。 =A6u=
I have no experience. （fault) w|n?m
I am I don't know much about that. _>_ y@-b
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. 0N3tsIm>
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13. 我没有男朋友。 2'O!~8U
I have no boyfriend. （fault) yaYIgG
I don't have a boyfriend.
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14. 他的身体很健康。 &]"_pc/>m
His body is healthy. （fault) !w;A=
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 L F -+5`
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) KoQ_: `
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16. 我们下了车。 [ ;3EzZL
We got off the car. $.3CiM }~
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17. 车速快了。 ''\cBM!
The speed of the car is fast. 7 , &]1+n
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ qS/71Kv'
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? ?+} E
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以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. |"tV[" a
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 ETH#IM8J
I feel very painful in my right hand. sJYKt
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 WX[dM
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He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) 1WA""yb
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 yQA"T?
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) 6Nd_YX
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. UgP=k ){
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 I` n1M+=%
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) r<f-v_bxF
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. ~E:/oV:4 >
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 i7w}`vs
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. n4d(`
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24. 别理她。 Rp@}9qijb
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) k f K"i
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25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 0 *Yivx6
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) !PP?2Ax
I learned a lot in university. Nm :|C 3_I
26. 黄山正在读书。 kp
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Samuel is reading a book. （fault) ;Wrd=)Ka
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 xzf)_ <
I am having many difficulties. （fault) ]I*#R9
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29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 #<V'gE
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) 5bq Y i
Please hurry up or well be late. 4#Nd;gM2
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 {Z~VO
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) [r<
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