1. I very like it （Fault） U@#?T
I like it very much. (true) P@2tR5<R
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 P87ld._
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) "\4]X"3<+
The price is right. I ca3
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 4sb )^3T
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ y +?=E g
What's your job? （fault) {%=S+89l
Are you working at the moment? D*CIE\+
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 yQ8M >H#J
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4. 用英语怎么说？ :-w @^mli
How to say? （fault) #m[vn^8B]y
How do you say this in English? @55bE\E?@
Note：How to say是在中国最为泛滥成灾的中国式英语之一，这决不是地道的英语说法。同样的句子有：请问这个词如何拼写？How do you spell that please?请问这个单词怎么读？How do you pronounce this word? ^I@ey*$
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 `< S/?I8
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) 9!5b2!J L
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. m~##q}LZ
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. ylkp Yd
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6. 我没有英文名。 RlU;v2Kch
I haven't English name. （fault) B{;11 u
I don't have an English name. mgo'MW\
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 hK:#+hg,
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. CFD*g\g<*
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7. 我想我不行。 b;Hm\aK
I think I can't.（fault) :/>7$)+
I don't think I can. >BJ2v=R A
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 3?.6K0L
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 w/qQ(] n8
I don't dance well too. （fault) uG2Xkj
I am not a very good dancer either. ARmu{cL
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 BXT 80a\
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9. 现在几点钟了？ Tq9,c#}&
What time is it now? （fault) #x, ]D
What time is it, please? 2ZU@>W
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 <dq,y>
My English is poor. （fault) $/4Wod*l
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. h |s*i
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. R' vdk<
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 3js)niT9u
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 E^oEG4 X@
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. 3Qqnw{*
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 -X`~;=m>U
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ TvQWdX=
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) p3V9ikyy
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? A28ZSL
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 @uQ%o%Ru6
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12. 我没有经验。 !JT< (I2
I have no experience. （fault) gUks O!7^1
I am I don't know much about that. R g%R/p)C
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. hp?ad
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13. 我没有男朋友。
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I have no boyfriend. （fault) =@bXGMsV!
I don't have a boyfriend. Q{%HW4lg
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14. 他的身体很健康。 3m-edpH
His body is healthy. （fault) 1h#w"4
He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. I'KR'1z 9
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The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) E`oSi
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The price is too high/ rather low. ZkJY.H-F
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16. 我们下了车。 $=\oJ-(!@S
We got off the car. @qg0u#k5
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17. 车速快了。 *D,v>(
The speed of the car is fast. [,\'V0
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ uKLOh<oio
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? h#(. (d
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） :d!i[W*
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） tEi@p;Z>
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. sW>P-
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 D6 C -x
I feel very painful in my right hand. Pur"9jHa4
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 W h#_9);
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) y>)mSl@1y
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 cH qvkN`
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) Tz D:bKE&
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. o=a:L^n t,
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 htdn$kqG
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) ~N NaLl
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. R7\{w(`K
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 :ofE8]
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. ? X8K$g
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. lB5 [#z
24. 别理她。 % xH>0
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) +1JZB* W
Leave her alone. =$:4v`W0(
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 Ymrpf
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) \K4 CbZ,.
I learned a lot in university. [T$$od[.
26. 黄山正在读书。 PuUon6bZ
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) MkluK=$
Samuel is reading. _umO)]Si
27. exciting / excited。 2vk8+LA(6
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 &gKP6ANx2
I am having many difficulties. （fault) D _,_.C~O
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. yK @X^jf
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 x~3>1Wr#M
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) @=aq&gb
Please hurry up or well be late. (rY1O:*S
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 Oy? iAQ+
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) LyCV_6;D
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