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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 I3}I7oc_
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) [Qqss8 a
The price is right. ZiaFByLy
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ UyDq`@h
What's your job? （fault) }5B\: *yW
Are you working at the moment? koj*3@\p/
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 fA ), ^
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4. 用英语怎么说？ nD=N MqQ &
How to say? （fault) =%b1EY k
How do you say this in English? .j"@7# tW
Note：How to say是在中国最为泛滥成灾的中国式英语之一，这决不是地道的英语说法。同样的句子有：请问这个词如何拼写？How do you spell that please?请问这个单词怎么读？How do you pronounce this word? u|Ng>lU
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 ]l
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) SUsdX[byb
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. _0Y?(}
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. #aKUD
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6. 我没有英文名。 x3nUKQtk:8
I haven't English name. （fault) n KjT&R
I don't have an English name. wiM4,
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 SJsbuLxR
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. jRW@ $ <mG
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7. 我想我不行。 R~RE21kAc
I think I can't.（fault) OA[fQH#{lX
I don't think I can. 5`::#[
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 }=u#,nDl>$
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 `?"r\Qo<
I don't dance well too. （fault) !0v3Lu ~j
I am not a very good dancer either. 2=n aPTP(
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 bP uO~#iN~
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9. 现在几点钟了？ ]qEg5:yY
What time is it now? （fault) Bc< pD?uOK
What time is it, please? ?0 7}\N0~
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 q 'uGB fE.
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 Y&$puiH-j
My English is poor. （fault) x l=i _
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. Lo=n)cV 1,
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. TT&%[A+
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 :fnK`RnaQ
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 6 8Vxy
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. iY5V4Gbo
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 !3z
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ 7~L_>7 ;
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) -N A2+].
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12. 我没有经验。 C)% qs]
I have no experience. （fault) s&\krW &
I am I don't know much about that. Qm*X Wo
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. \\`(x:\
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13. 我没有男朋友。 Xv 7noq|
I have no boyfriend. （fault) BUyKiMW 49
I don't have a boyfriend. mR8tW"Z2
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14. 他的身体很健康。 /.sh o\ a
His body is healthy. （fault) isFxo,R9r
He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. 4Wa *Pcj
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 1 r3}
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The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) $|AasT5w
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16. 我们下了车。 LbR'nG{J
We got off the car. +/hd;s$x
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17. 车速快了。 6wZ)GLW[
The speed of the car is fast. =RQI5 nHdw
The car is speeding. Or 揟he car is going too fast.? $\ PU Y8
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ ; {v2s;
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? #J
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） f| ~X}R
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） g~76c.u-
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. >G As&\4hs
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 CW]Th-xc
I feel very painful in my right hand. @R (Op|9
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 Y) l=r^Ap>
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) J
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 1Afy$It /{
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) j}6h}E&dEr
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. V~ do6[(
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 tjx|;m7
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) Z EvK
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. )g KC}_h=
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 )RQ QhB
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. pX1Us+%
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24. 别理她。 J5 Ti@(G5V
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) FOjX,@x&
Leave her alone. n+nZ;GJ5d
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 Fqh./@o
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) (B! DBnq
I learned a lot in university. <-,y0Y '
26. 黄山正在读书。 '~1Zr uO
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) nC)"% Sa
Samuel is reading. WuTkYiF
27. exciting / excited。 L$y~\1-
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 z" ;(0%
I am having many difficulties. （fault) W{~ y< `D
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. s^Xs*T@~h
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 t]?{"O1rC
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) ]bYmM@
Please hurry up or well be late. g1(5QWb
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 ):y^g:
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) V/zmbo)
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