1. I very like it （Fault） +9f Q YJBA
I like it very much. (true) 6o
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 3ss0/\3P
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) W{l{O1,
The price is right. 4^IqHx;bj
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ nQm
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 @ ?/> $
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4. 用英语怎么说？ ]fdxpq z
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5. 明天我有事情要做。
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用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. ? `+G0VT
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6. 我没有英文名。 S0]JeP+3!
I haven't English name. （fault) C(J +tbk
I don't have an English name. Evy_I+l
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 ' u84d= *l
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. 2 ,^ U8/
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7. 我想我不行。 o ?`LZd:{
I think I can't.（fault) &^hLFd7j/
I don't think I can. !M(3[(Ni
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 {+CBThC
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 C lWxL#L6~
I don't dance well too. （fault) gnWEsA\!
I am not a very good dancer either. G ]k+0&X
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 6Z>G% yK
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9. 现在几点钟了？ dhCrcYn
What time is it now? （fault) m> YjV>5
What time is it, please? k8S`44vj
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 Dwa.ZY}-
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 3T)_(SM "
My English is poor. （fault) 5ST k"
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. {9;x\($&a
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. 3'x mq
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 ?d5_{*]+v
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 mXK7y.9\
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. E (miQ
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 ,(v=ZeI
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ ' &<saqA
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Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 +8Q5[lh2]j
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12. 我没有经验。 .:9XpKbt
I have no experience. （fault)
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I am I don't know much about that. 3:?QE
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13. 我没有男朋友。 )n{9*{Ch
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14. 他的身体很健康。 6|B;C
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 v&3 Oc
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) 9FcH\ 2J
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16. 我们下了车。 ?!;i/h*{
We got off the car. /?B%,$~
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17. 车速快了。 [{-5
The speed of the car is fast. wCw_aXqq
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ ;uyQ R8
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival?
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以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. %h4|$
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 |TRl >1rv
I feel very painful in my right hand. ur JR[$p
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 Sp./*h\}
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) " Ax#x
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 w|(
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I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) . ,&6 x.
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. 8ps1Q2|
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 >d<tcaB
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) <hB~|a<#
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. G`R_kg9$
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 UdK +,k~m/
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. U!i @XA%P
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. $&KiN8 2,
24. 别理她。 k56*eEc
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) i/aj;t
Leave her alone. o!sHK9hvJ)
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 rPkPQn:
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) ^.u
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I learned a lot in university. 5@yBU wMSj
26. 黄山正在读书。 2|D<0d#W
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) ,. TwM;w=
Samuel is reading. #)z7&nD
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 G&@vTcF
I am having many difficulties. （fault) P.'$L\
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. naiy] oY"
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 ku^0bq}BrH
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) @i>o+>V
Please hurry up or well be late. )O$T; U
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 NzC&ctPk
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) XBN,{
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