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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 x[lIib1s
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) _6fy'%J=U
The price is right. ?w(hPUd!2
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ n5C ,Z!)z
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4. 用英语怎么说？ ,+df=>$W
How to say? （fault) t|'%0 W
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用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. 9~`#aQG T
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6. 我没有英文名。 wKi#5k2
I haven't English name. （fault) ^S`hKv&87
I don't have an English name. 2n3&uvf'TL
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 f5F-h0HF`[
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. b z>\n"'
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7. 我想我不行。 HsTY* ^V
I think I can't.（fault) R=.?e l
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Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 9^DAlY,x.
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 YT?Lt!cl=
I don't dance well too. （fault) g^
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I am not a very good dancer either. atpHv**D<i
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 wL~A L
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9. 现在几点钟了？ 33<{1Y[Q6E
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What time is it, please? OB9E30
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 &S
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 K 3\a~_0
My English is poor. （fault) +%Tg X&a
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. Fk49~z
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. cEa8l~GC<
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 Fy\q >(v.
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 n@tt.n!{l
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. Ag2~q
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ c/88|k
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) JYj*. Q0
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12. 我没有经验。 9IXy96 ]]6
I have no experience. （fault)
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I am I don't know much about that. 1c QF(j_
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13. 我没有男朋友。 4G:~|N.{p
I have no boyfriend. （fault) vcj(=\
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14. 他的身体很健康。 H.|I|XRG/
His body is healthy. （fault) 7:F0?l*
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 h8O\sKn
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) u~*A-X [
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16. 我们下了车。 G~C-tAB
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The speed of the car is fast. qJs_ahy(
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ ;]xc}4@=mg
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? _)< 5c!
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。
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I feel very painful in my right hand. V?* fl^f
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 $X;OK
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) vh&~Y].W Y
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 5N>f lQ
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) \C ~ 6
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After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. c}$>UhLe
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 h{o,*QL
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) `+(n+QS _
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23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 {q$U\y%Rq
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. w5y.kc;
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24. 别理她。 J
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Don't pay attention to her. （fault) 8IL5 :7H8
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25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 Mu:zWLM*M
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) ?r(vXq\
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26. 黄山正在读书。 |O)ZjLx
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) B>'J5bZsw
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 uL7}JQ,
I am having many difficulties. （fault) gA_ oJ W4_
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. -">Tvi4
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 g qORE/[
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) dHOH] x
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30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 8zRw\]?
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) 2 7[e0 j
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