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I like it very much. (true) |U;O HS
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 ZfX$q\7
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) M49l2x=]9
The price is right. L%(NXSfu7
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ qbD
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What's your job? （fault) 1 ++g @8
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 `_ 1~[t
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4. 用英语怎么说？ ohq Thl
How to say? （fault) D-LOjMe
How do you say this in English? B C e'J!
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 ,3 /o7 '
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) ObEz 0Rj
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. -$o0P'Vx
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. u%e~a]
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6. 我没有英文名。 nOL.%
I haven't English name. （fault) WY TqQqQk
I don't have an English name. L55 UeP\
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 Rr %x;-
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. c/tB_ ]
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7. 我想我不行。 X>=` l)ZR
I think I can't.（fault) PjEJ C@n
I don't think I can. U< Xdhgo?
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 ^_|kEvk0
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 =n"k gn
I don't dance well too. （fault) CUI+@|]%
I am not a very good dancer either. Dho6N]86r
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 C$6FI `J
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9. 现在几点钟了？ &Q~W{.
What time is it now? （fault) }Cu[x'J
What time is it, please? `e
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 kaekH*m~
My English is poor. （fault) g) oOravV
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. h9ScN(|0y
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. ]qv0Y~+`-K
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 X>o9mW
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 g) u%?T
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. %|(c?`2|
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 +_i{4Iz~p
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ {s0%XG1$
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) Om0$6O
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? @U ez2?
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 f+ceL'fr
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12. 我没有经验。 El<*)
I have no experience. （fault) w7U]-MW6A*
I am I don't know much about that. v&YeQC>
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. XJ4f;U
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13. 我没有男朋友。 ?ZRF]\dP]
I have no boyfriend. （fault) mgjJNzclL
I don't have a boyfriend. A ]A{HEX
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14. 他的身体很健康。 .Az36wD
His body is healthy. （fault) }UW7py!TN
He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. (E0
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 |q77
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) !,[#,oy ;
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16. 我们下了车。 @N>7+
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We got off the car. !uEEuD#
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17. 车速快了。 tUv>1)
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The speed of the car is fast. ~wb1sn3
The car is speeding. Or 揟he car is going too fast.? ^Pn|Q '{/p
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ At(88(y-W
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? 6 Xvpk1
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） X8|H5Y:
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） K |P0nJT
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. @YI{ E*?S
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 buGBqx[
I feel very painful in my right hand. 3 B&A)&pEO
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 k)p` x "To
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) !Z!)$3bB
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 x E1?)
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) (g##wa) L
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. AjVC{\Ik
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 t%=7v)IOE
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) r6DLShP-Ur
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. :;k?/KU7
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 ;,4*uU'vq
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. 2@|`Ugjptl
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. )pWgt5:7~
24. 别理她。 9z7_D_yN2
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) NdXHpq;
Leave her alone. R|st<P
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 wNf:_^|}
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) E2e"A
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26. 黄山正在读书。 }je<^]a
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) S,&LH-ps
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 -^@FZ R^Y
I am having many difficulties. （fault) /JD}b[J$
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. xWLvx'8W
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 B>2=IZ
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) _}l(i1o,/
Please hurry up or well be late. a"#t'\
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 9 [eiN
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) -)V0D,r$[
Jealousy drove her to despair. jD
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