上了高联辅导班商志的作文班。其实就是获得了一个作文模板，考试的时候很是受用，发出来，让大家看一下。
大作文
第一段
How enlightening and compelling the above drawing is! It is so funny that whoever sees it cannot help thinking:_____. (这句自己加完整，从宏观上描述一下图画就可以，笼统的，大体的) ______while_______.(这句从微观上具体说明一下图画要描述的矛盾点，必须找到矛盾点，用到while这个单词) Simple as it looks,its intended(或者用implied) meaning goes far deeper what on earth（究竟） does the drawer（作者） really aim to convey.
第二段
What the image above vividly mirrors（名词用做动词） goes far more than a simple image,insteed,it carries（有） a thought provoking socia phenomenon:____.（本文的主旨）There are upsetting(如文章不是讽刺性的，就把upsetting删除) parallels today in our contemporary community,and an acquaintance of mine may serve as a good example.______.(用一句话或者两句话来举例)Another telling example is my fomer colleague,who___.（另外一个例子，如果字数够就不用再举）
第三段：
Much can be done. To begain with the schools and the mass media should develop noble and worthy values and qualities among people,doing their utmost to awaken people of the growing threat of this worsening situation.（of this worsening situation自己可以换成主旨的句子，如果不换，这样也可以。如文章不是讽刺性的，就把worsening删除）What is more,the authorities （当局）should play a dominant role in taking nationwide actions to curb(如文章不是讽刺性的，就把curb换成promote) such practices.In conclusion ,all the society should actively more sustained（持续） and concerted （一致）offorts.Although we still have a long way to go ,a promising start has bagun,and a happy,healthy and harmonious（和谐） society may be not be far benind.
注意事项：
1不要写题目
2要看清楚图画是一副还是两副，单数还是复数
3看清楚是卡通还是普通图画
卡通cartoon 也可以用以下几个picture image drawing illustration
图画Photo 也可以用以下几个picture image photograph
4红色字体就是可以直接套用的。任何题材都可以。
小作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,（在没有明确收信人的时候，就用这个）
第一段
第1句介绍自己，按照这这个句型就可以I am a senior in Computer Science Department （计算机系）of Fudan University. 第2句说明自己的目的_______（自己写）.第3句 So I am writing to you for help.或者I am writing to present my reguest. 第4句通用句Thank you in advance for your attention to this letter.
第二段
第1句通用句There are a host of/ many a （许多）factors contributing to this decision(如果是邀请就写invitation,如果是介绍信就写introduction)
如果是两点式 on one thing——。on another——。
如果是三点式:首先：to begin with/ initivally/ primarily
第二：What is more/ moreover /in the second place
第三：Additionally/in the third place
（以上自己选择一种，固定下来，只要遇到三段式就按照自己选择的词语写，但是注意in the second place和in the third place不要重复用，可以避开）
第三段
I,d be most grateful if you can ____.Your kind reply to the letter (或者my inquiry)at your earliest covenience would be very much appreciated.（通用句）
Yours sincerely（必须这样）
Liming
